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With the River

Single drops form and run down the mountain side To form a roaring river that runs to meet the tide With the river went my dreams and those tears I cried.. 2/16/16

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Date: 2/21/2016 10:44:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Barbara..
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win , Barbara! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:20:00 PM
Back with merited congratulations, Barbara:) Well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/21/2016 12:42:00 PM
Lovely, Barbara. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:22:00 AM
barbara, glad to see this one again. BIG congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:11:00 AM
Barbara, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:32:00 PM
well, I REALLY like this one, Barb, it's one of MY favorites I've seen for this theme. I used dreams in my last line too (not posted quite yet)
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:48:00 PM
From the rivers, to the tide, to the heart. I liked your connection with nature to your emotions ... poignantly expressed.
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:54:00 PM
Hello Barbara...I've been gone so much just saw you here had to read...so lovely...hope you find new dreams and sunshine and are feeling much better than last we spoke
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:20:00 PM
Very sad, Barbara and very beautifully expressed.
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Date: 2/16/2016 4:04:00 PM
Sad but lovely, Barbara. Many times our dreams come to naught! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:41:00 PM
Very sad, Barbara. So sorry for your loss.
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