Witch

Wizardry in black dress whips up cauldron of dread warts, newts and black potions whisks wildly on broomstick with a dark, evil eye while cackling wickedly woe to those who listen. 9/19/2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2023 8:23:00 PM

Good one!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/21/2023 12:48:00 PM

Thanks, Kim!

The Situation

Date: 9/28/2023 6:55:00 PM

Very seasonable. Boo !!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2023 3:59:00 PM

Ha! Thanks, Situation :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2023 10:44:00 AM

Very "witchy" and haunting, Laura! Love the warning in the last line. Well done! Time to find those earplugs! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2023 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/27/2023 3:41:00 PM

Great Pleiades, Laura! Congrats on your win. Janice

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2023 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Janice! :)

Terry Miller

Date: 9/27/2023 7:23:00 AM

very nicely penned; congratulations

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2023 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Terry! :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:07:00 AM

Congrats on your win Laura, Very nicely penned

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2023 6:24:00 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest, Joseph! I’m so glad you liked this! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/22/2023 1:01:00 PM

Great word choices here, Laura, I really like 'whisks wildyly' and 'woe to those who listen' - may your witch be a winner :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/22/2023 7:18:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle, for your kind comments. I’m happy you liked this! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2023 3:42:00 AM

Brilliant Pleiades. You captured the essence of a witch. Great imagery too. Best for a win.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2023 1:09:00 PM

Thank you, Victor! So happy you liked this. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/20/2023 5:55:00 PM

Dear Laura, I adore the dark witchy imagery of your eerie poem. Great use of the pleiades form for your poetic sorcery! Enchanting my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2023 1:09:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! So glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for your kind comments! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 7:13:00 AM

- Great done, Laura ... "whisks wildly on broomstick" :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/20/2023 11:49:00 AM

Thank you. Anne-Lise. Glad you liked this one! :)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/20/2023 5:52:00 AM

Ha! That last line says it all. Witches in pop culture seem benign and fun, but we know better, right? Nice Pleiades Laura

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/20/2023 7:11:00 AM

Yes! Thanks for commenting, Tom. :)