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Winter's Core

The cold dark depths of winter haunt me once again It was a good year, a mild year, but it always comes to freeze my mind and make me numb All is white yet somehow dark like some black frozen arrow hit it’s mark The cold dark depths of winter chill me to the bone The thick frosted air weighs down my lungs as they breathe towards the sky in search for the sun My thoughts more heavy of what has been go searching for their quiet end The cold dark depths of winter confine me once again Banished in the darkest nights it’s creeping death I try to fight Invades me to my deepest core till light and warmth I feel no more The cold dark depths of winter try me once again A cold reminder that time goes by and we let it all pass in front of our eyes All the things that I adore now frozen into Winter’s Core

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/10/2017 11:33:00 PM
Chris, this is a very, very finely written poem. The Winter which you describe sounds so dark, so cold, and so uninviting that it almost seems like it talks of the polar ice caps. Well done!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 9/12/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thanks so much for visiting Thomas :) And thanks for your kind words...this is how February in Michigan feels sometimes I guess...still love my "Mitten" though! Have great day :) C.H.
Date: 3/11/2017 2:33:00 PM
A geat first line and then it continues. Well done.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 3/11/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words and the visit today Dave:)
Date: 2/12/2017 6:40:00 PM
WOW. This gets a FAVE!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/12/2017 7:22:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! That means a lot coming from you:)...Always glad to hear from you!
Date: 1/19/2017 4:11:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, your words and phrases have texture, if that makes sense. Very descriptive and easily felt. I felt a chill as I read it.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/11/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Chris... Sorry I gave you a chill, but elated my words could do that:)...sorry it took so long to reply...crazy new year!

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