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WINTERS

came out of home standing on the crosswalk 3.45 am streets are empty yet I can feel the voices cold breeze came like a whisper in ear telling the stories buried under roads. Winters came with snow white poor guy sleeping on street side freezing and cursing god came to other street everyone is gone in dream all were suffering some are alleviation and some extreme cold is winters so is my heart like counterpart there is emptiness there is loneliness there is strangeness and then there is empathy all this making my soul kind going down the street leaving my footprints behind. Walk continuous feet are going on like a finger of pianist endless darkness endless snowfall endless world nothing is stop just like clock its 4.45am maybe its new beginning sun about to rise some are going to die some going escape from life.

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Date: 1/12/2024 3:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:12:00 AM
This is so poignant and heartfelt and so profound! I love the flow of your lines and how descriptive it is in a way that would get readers to feel so much. I especially felt the lines “ there is emptiness there is loneliness there is strangeness and then there is empathy all this making my soul kind “ hits home for me and resonates so deeply and i love “ Walk continuous feet are going on like a finger of pianist endless darkness endless “ so creative!love this!Pleasure reading
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