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Winter Trees

Winter trees bleeding leaves of silent shivers in silver rivers 12/03/23

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2024 7:49:00 PM

Something tells me that this erstwhile 'Bloody Mary' gives ME the silent shivers. Such probing imagery, Michelle. ~ Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/12/2023 9:21:00 PM

Again such an such an apt description of a river carrying leaves to their new cycle in life where they will settle in numbers and which will one day become a tree and which one day will go through the same process. A great write Jennifer Hugs, blessings, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Karen Croft

Date: 12/9/2023 2:17:00 AM

Lovely monoku

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 9:32:00 AM

This was a deep one liner.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest

Lin Lane

Date: 12/8/2023 3:56:00 AM

Just enough rhyming and alliteration. Cleverly written and congratulations on being honored, Michelle.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/7/2023 12:32:00 PM

Beautiful words choices left me lingering with this one. Enjoyed. Congratulations on your placement

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/7/2023 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so much. appreciate it

Bill Baker

Date: 12/4/2023 9:53:00 PM

Love your alliteration in your Monoku, Michelle. Well said, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/4/2023 1:28:00 PM

This composition exuded brilliance through the use of a considerable degree of ingenuity, allure, winsome allusions, assurance, and alliteration. Outstanding work, Michelle

John Watt

Date: 12/3/2023 11:09:00 PM

This has wonderful winter imagery, assurance, alliteration, and a healthy dose of Michelle Faulkner originality and pizzazz. Well done, my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/3/2023 6:28:00 PM

Quite a bit of 'bang for your buck' in this monoku, Michelle. ~ Scissors quivers

Paige Hind

Date: 12/3/2023 6:17:00 PM

Very beautiful, dear Michelle. Glad to see you post! Silent rivers of.... hope, I wish, for you, because the leaves don't die in vain... they show us their beauty before they fall.