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snow dances lightly white upon her black long hair winter love blessing David Meade 1/11/2015 Live Generously

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Date: 3/5/2015 3:55:00 AM
"Her black long hair" is very descriptive of winter.//7// Best wishes, Julia
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Date: 2/26/2015 10:59:00 AM
A beautiful way to dress up a winter. Ours has been a way too long. Love, daver
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:39:00 AM
David, beautify in a few words, wonderful and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 1/30/2015 8:00:00 AM
I love snow, and tend to read all poems posted about it. This is a good example of the Americanized form of Tanka (man and nature). Lovely poem, David.
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:59:00 PM
I still really love this one.
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Date: 1/27/2015 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful haiku and imagery...helps me appreciate winter a little more...Loved it :) Ana
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Date: 1/23/2015 2:33:00 PM
I love the falling snow..What an imagery
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Date: 1/23/2015 2:07:00 PM
How courteous, David. A love haiku of season and reason. bless you.
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:43:00 AM
White upon her black long hair... sweet story in few words... nice pen David.
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Date: 1/21/2015 10:09:00 PM
HELLO David I thought WINTER LOVE was a COLD Blissful LOVE story:-)
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Date: 1/20/2015 8:41:00 AM
Beautiful painted winter pen Dave! I truly enjoyed your winter musing here dear friend. Love the imagery and the structure! A 7 from me! :) Have a very lovely day! Love and hugs! xxxxx D:). ^O^""
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Date: 1/19/2015 7:32:00 AM
Heavenly beautiful! A seven dear, David!
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David Meade
Date: 1/19/2015 8:39:00 AM
Thank-you my dear brother! May His love flow freely through your pen to bless us.
Date: 1/18/2015 10:37:00 PM
Some great comments! I enjoyed reading this one again David.
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Date: 1/18/2015 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, David, Snow White Winter. 7 Blessings eve
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:05:00 PM
Maybe [winter's love is a blessing- or-winter love - a blessing] - when in doubt of the form just put verse ;) Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:13:00 PM
Yes!! I left the meaning open for either or both . . . a double blessings . . . I try doing this with many of my poems . . . much love and light dear Debbie and thank-you for noticing
Date: 1/18/2015 9:13:00 AM
You paint a picture with a few words. Well done. Emile.
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:58:00 PM
David, this poem will continue to play in my minds eye all day. Beautiful!
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:07:00 AM
Hello, David. I see you've made a change in this! :) I like it.
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:53:00 PM
Ha! you noticed . . . I wondered if you would . . . I like the change. love and light my dear Little One.
Date: 1/16/2015 9:47:00 AM
This is 5-7-5 Haiku. Ain't it fun. You have a lot of comments to respond to. Glad I don't get as many as you do. You are right in there. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran
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Date: 1/15/2015 3:45:00 PM
Dropping by to say hello David.
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:14:00 AM
This is a lovely haiku, David, and the imagery is great! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/14/2015 7:40:00 PM
I know I already commented on this poem but I wanted to read it again simply put I enjoyed it that much, I like it's smooth flavor, thanks by the way for your favoring it I'm flattered my friend, cheri
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Date: 1/14/2015 11:37:00 AM
love the visual here, could if you want. be a haiku form of poetry..
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:41:00 PM
A lovely view of snow.
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Date: 1/13/2015 1:30:00 PM
A wonderful imagery here my friend, Love the picture it posted in my imagination, it might be short but it is totally sweet for inspirational purposes, bravo, cheri
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