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Winter

The depth of winter hails the mournful song of the currawongs as they exchange a sorrowful lament with one another. The chilled evening air echoes with their call, causing a melancholy dirge to settle within the soul. The white tipped wings and grey streaks on their bodies are reminiscent of the ever present hoary that portrays Winters settlement across the landscape. His stout crop of hair, once satin, now, what is left are small prickles of grey. The lined, weather beaten face etched with a pallor of silver slate casts its gaze across the numb, frosty country. His eyes carry an intense, glassy glare as they scan the Western sky. Slivers of the setting sun attempt to penetrate the altostatus that enclose the land under the icy fist of winters rule. The man appears frozen, unable or unwilling to move, like a statue of a stoic savant or relic from ancient times. Winter, he has lived through many, with the march of time each Winter seems to compress the cold through to the marrow of his bones. He scans the sky, assiduously searching for a sign that Spring is on the march, ready to lift the frigid Winter mantle and dispense with the cold. For he knows that just as Yahweh has set the seasons, brighter days are on the horizon and without wishing time away he yearns for the warmth and comfort of brighter days ahead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/13/2017 10:08:00 AM
I could be he bt as we are just entering Fall I am searching for the few remaining days of pseudo warmth left. A well written tale which held my interest first to last.
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Old Man Emu
Date: 9/14/2017 11:22:00 PM
Thanks Patricia, You are too kind. Glad someone else loves the warm
Date: 9/7/2017 10:50:00 PM
"Craig" this is you in your real glory - A excellent prose - Portraying a true felt like story - From which a real poet rose . . .
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Old Man Emu
Date: 9/8/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Indiana, a little exaggerated but I just get sick of being cold!
Date: 8/29/2017 12:17:00 PM
What a picture you have painted!!
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Old Man Emu
Date: 9/1/2017 5:39:00 PM
Thanks for the visit.
Date: 8/14/2017 6:47:00 AM
You write depicts elegant image as it flows pleasantly through my lung. Thanks for sharing.
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Old Man Emu
Date: 8/24/2017 3:36:00 PM
thanks Afolabi
Date: 8/10/2017 7:49:00 AM
Excellent. Vividly described and well penned.Thanks for sharing it.
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Old Man Emu
Date: 8/12/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Ravi
Date: 8/9/2017 10:48:00 PM
Winter is a beauty that bites quite hard and one must be prepared for it. Well-penned.
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Old Man Emu
Date: 8/11/2017 12:30:00 AM
Too true I'm never prepared!
Date: 8/9/2017 1:02:00 PM
- It's a beauty with the winter ... a landscape in frost, snow crystals that shine, stars on a winter sky, the snow that falls so quiet ... but I do not like it ... it's long, cold and dark - Give me the spring, flowers, butterflies, sunshine and happy laughter :) - A wonderful poem that gives a fair picture of winter, Craig - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2017 3:50:00 PM
You make a fair point Anne-Lise. There is a lot of beauty about winter, I guess it's a mood thing.
Date: 8/9/2017 7:30:00 AM
I like the melancholy tone of this winter write,.. beginning with the mournful song of the birds...Well written
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Old Man Emu
Date: 8/9/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Joseph appreciate your visit.
Date: 8/9/2017 1:23:00 AM
Craig, I love your poem on Winter. Sounds like your man is eagerly looking out for Spring as much as I am....Maria
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Date: 8/9/2017 1:47:00 AM
That is me! Desperate to be warm again. Thanks for the visit Maria
Date: 8/9/2017 1:15:00 AM
You spin a great tale Craig, wonderful prose brilliantly descriptive. Well done...
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Old Man Emu
Date: 8/9/2017 1:48:00 AM
Thanks Charlie.

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