Winter

'Tis Loki you hear vexing the shutters and doors Winter has come for our bones! I've made thee a fire Lie here with me before it, under the watch of the flames -----------------------------------

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:20:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Lycia Harding
Date: 1/26/2023 11:06:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:34:00 AM

I really liked this, Lycia. The "Loki" got me (lol). "Under the watch of the fire" love it! Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering :) Hugs Charlie

Lycia Harding
Date: 1/26/2023 11:05:00 PM

Thank you, Charles. Fun contest! xoxo LyLy

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 2:53:00 PM

I love how striking and vivid your prose is, Lycia, 'vexing the shutters and doors' and 'under the watch of the flames' so visceral!

Lycia Harding
Date: 1/13/2023 5:19:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle. This 'Sedoka' format is a little bit odd but it does lend a certain impact to a piece