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Peering through portals of time On gossamer wings Just past 89 Cherished moments Crystal bottles Blue Haze Memories never fade Seems like only yesterday Small tyke I was Could run like the wind Running so fast so free Barely touching the ground I was on Feeling sure so secure Wished it Could've Lasted forever Oh those wondrous years Away and away Nighty night time travelers Good night sweetheart Clocks unravel Churchbell chimes The sign of the times Clocks winding down Tick tock tick tock Seconds to minutes Tick tock tick tock Hours to day Day by day Ebbing nights Years shine ahead Echoing our lives And Going through time On gossamer wings.... All rights reserved A.camacho jr. 1996-2015

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Date: 2/23/2015 12:42:00 PM
Love the image and the imagery Tony - lovely flow to the poem and clever use of repeated lines:-) hugs jan xxx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2015 1:14:00 PM
I'm doing fine ... so far Tony - I guess in time the tears will flow:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 2/23/2015 12:55:00 PM
Jan always nice to hear from you and thank you for being on board with my writings,I don't write for everyone only the ones that enjoy my style.. Hope all is well...lov Tony
Date: 2/23/2015 12:10:00 PM
You start your poem with such a beautiful line "peering through portals of time" and the rest flows so well. I love that. Def a 7!
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 2/23/2015 12:24:00 PM
Njeri,you made my heart smile ,indeed it was a joy to write thank you,glad you enjoyed..tonytocaa

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