Wings

the eagle observes the deep lake for movement he makes a move CT

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2016 10:25:00 PM

hey, C.T. Great seeing a new "ku of yours!! let me see if you have others!

Sneha Rv

Date: 3/11/2016 11:25:00 AM

This is fantastic!! :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2016 7:56:00 AM

- I would say without (begins to) .... but I'm no expert :) - Lovely haiku, C.T. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2016 6:45:00 AM

when ever you use an LY word an adverb you are TELLing- you asked CT- no titles for haiku they are numbered or the first line is used - ok above [the eagle scans-the still lake for movement: sky diving] something like this would be more haiku like- Light & love

C T

Date: 2/20/2016 1:07:00 AM

please help. should I or shouldn't I add (begins to)