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Winds of Time

Unable to face the future alone;
she longs for happier days.
Kept out by winds of time.
Arlene Smith 02/15/15 Contest: In Praise Of A Kimo Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Visual #2

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Date: 3/26/2015 4:44:00 PM
That is so thought provoking.
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Date: 2/26/2015 10:31:00 AM
three lines but speaks of volume!!!
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Date: 2/23/2015 10:00:00 PM
Wow, I can just feel the pressure against my heart. Swimming against the tide to never reach the shore. You broke our hearts in three lines.
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:39:00 AM
Brilliant...so much emotion packed into this little gem.
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:28:00 AM
Very nice, Arlene! I really like how you poetically interpreted this visual which is so intriguing. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/15/2015 6:02:00 PM
my , i really need to get to this contest because it sure looks to be filling up super fast, and very nicely done, Arlene!!
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Date: 2/15/2015 5:29:00 PM
So beautifully penned Arlene - good luck in the contest:-)hugs jan xx
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