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Winds of Change

i lay stilled atop this muddied cold ground a castaway like autumn's leaves deadened unable, unwilling to move around i sit bloodied, like skies of dawn, reddened i am bathed in november's cold, harsh rain pummeled by the fate of past's sniffling cries slowly succumbing beneath weighted pain i reach out attempting to dry my eyes perhaps it is the will of fate to die to wither and crumble atop this ground to gather where the helpless others lie to succumb here, unseen, wrinkled and browned is life's pain something to be remembered or cast off in the winds of december? 11/21/2020

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Date: 8/1/2021 9:34:00 AM
Belated congrats on this very emotive and expressive winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:41:00 PM
perhaps it is the will of fate to die to wither and crumble atop this ground Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/1/2020 7:41:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this win. An emotional write. Love how you ended it. Enjoy your win and your day with a hug...............
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Date: 11/30/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thought-provoking Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/29/2020 12:43:00 PM
How did I miss this POTD honor Sandra? Congratulations on your POTD honor and your win. Evocative, creative struggle between life and death so well expressed. sending you hugs and blessings.
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:31:00 AM
Sandra, you are great with emotional impact! Congratulations on first place!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim... my muse had been sleeping so a win made me feel good... hoping she stays awake... hugs
Date: 11/29/2020 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra, a worthy win in the contest... Belle
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Belle! hugs
Date: 11/28/2020 9:52:00 PM
Hi Sandra, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis :) hugs
Date: 11/28/2020 9:25:00 PM
Back to regale you with further congratulations on your 1st place in the sonnet contest. I seem to recall that sonnets are not your favorite form but you knocked this one out of the park. Well done! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:44:00 AM
Rhyme is always a struggle for me... John and Craig both run sonnet contests so i have written a few a few, i still struggle with them...thank you for your kind words... hugs
Date: 11/28/2020 7:26:00 PM
Another stunner of a write Sandy, this is what has been missing in my contests... You! Congrats on a top win!
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Date: 11/28/2020 9:00:00 PM
wow... thank you John...i am honored for the win and humbled by your words... hugs
Date: 11/28/2020 6:31:00 PM
Great write Sandy and congratulations on the POTD, this superbly penned with good insightful thoughts with real powerful imagery. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/28/2020 9:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon! :) hugs
Date: 11/27/2020 2:15:00 PM
Sandra Congrats on POTD and another superb poem from you! I was wondering about you, wondering the relative silence on your page!! Glad to see you back in top form!!!
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much... had a writer's block going on... it happens from time to time... good to hear from you :)
Date: 11/27/2020 1:31:00 AM
Back to offer heartfelt congratulations on your POTD honors, dear friend. This is a gem. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much John :) hugs
Date: 11/26/2020 11:02:00 AM
A beautiful sadness
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much! hugs
Date: 11/25/2020 11:59:00 AM
Belated congrats on POTD, S.A. Richly deserved. Here's to Sunlight and Gentle Breezes, Gershon
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:48:00 PM
Thank you Gershon... love sunshine, and breezes are ok if its summertime... hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 11:47:00 AM
A beautifully emotive piece, well deserving of the honor of receiving POTD Sandra! Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you Connie... hugs my friend!
Date: 11/24/2020 4:25:00 AM
Hi Sandra, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis :) hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 4:01:00 AM
Deeply emotive sonnet, congrats on POTD..
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend... i guess my muse came out of the darkness and brought it out with her... hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 3:54:00 AM
You deserve to win POTD Joseph with this awesome, well crafted poem - you are a very kind and understanding poet, and thank you for you support and friendship. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 12/1/2020 6:19:00 AM
Sandra I am so sorry I had been on soup all day, and I said Joseph instead of Sandy, you certainly are a beautiful Sandy and I'll have to apologist to Joseph as well - everything I said was for you, just got the name wrong - apologies Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/24/2020 3:48:00 AM
WoW! Sandra, You have penned a well-written sad poetic write. The raw emotion leapt off the page.The content, imagery and metaphors were top notch. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 11:11:00 PM
Exquisite poetry, Sandra! The words dance w/lively emotion. Kudos on POTD. Love and more love always.
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Freddie... hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Sandra, great imagery.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations! Pangie
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you... hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 7:24:00 PM
"bloodied like skies of dawn, reddened, unable to move around" No one deserves to be in such a moment. Your thoughts are deep and emotional. I can feel the pain within. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Brandy... my muse often digs through the layers of darkness! hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 5:51:00 PM
Wonderful crafted words
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Paul!
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