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1. We are upstairs, rolling on a derailleur much fun is timely prepared by fate’s chauffeur rooms facing each other is the plasticine the models of our contact is the icing from her own end, she chooses my Tuxedo and from mine, I scale her feminine ego our adventure begins to build a factory ladders and ropes have added to the story showing guts as durable as the bamboo pock nosing dogs bark but our indifference boo carefully playing with the tarantula as fun’s dissected with a long spatula two very curious sitting minds now recline any huge step further and their hearts decline. Chorus Window neighbours we are nothing has stayed sweater she’s in the east, I’m in the west the connection is beautiful but also neat please neighbour, let the windows never stay closed. 2. Sneaking sights of each other, we had no qualms seeing her dress was a mistake, so no more calm? her twist puts me in total obscurity acting as if in need of security why can’t we cool off this tension’s libido? I will strip when we are both by the window such a simple joke has brought back our lost spa time for bed, but time for us to be at par window contact using more than just the eye but night time has never been as nice as pie all the sneaking boys will not make me appalled it’s that time of her life so she shln’t be stalled light through the close frame shows there’s activity every episode hugs my curiosity. Chorus Window neighbours we are nothing has stayed sweater she’s in the east, I’m in the west the connection is beautiful but also neat please neighbour, let the windows never stay closed. 3. Opposite windows, now a door and a fuse whatever is seen and talked is put to use my manipulation of girls, her template her good choice of fashion, teaches how to date just windows, but enough for any sharp eyed clear competitions with no reasons to lie her hygiene and orderliness are premium I keep up beyond the perceived minimum lives so parallel and far from the pigeon those downstairs are constantly drugged by our gin this sweet companionship is clear and straight edged free, lose, wonderful and without any pledge even though our hormones have been quite stable the great feeling makes us inseparable. Chorus Window neighbours we are nothing has stayed sweater she’s in the east, I’m in the west the connection is beautiful but also neat please neighbour, let the windows never stay closed.

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Date: 8/6/2017 12:17:00 PM
"Brilliant" Funom as your name suggests you put a bit of fun yet with purpose into this one with a "Brilliant" imagery to go with it - Indiana . . . ; )
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Date: 1/30/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Indiana
Date: 8/1/2017 4:44:00 PM
These lyrics are extremely creative, to say the least, Funom!! I have no doubt that deep down you have a fine sense of humour. I hope bad weather won't spoil the fun! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/30/2018 10:29:00 AM
hahahahahaha... Bad weather can't spoil the fun.. Thank you so much Callus

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