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Wind Song

The wind sang a soft song it drifted on a lazy afternoon humming through the trees leaves danced in it's breeze it came to a corner let out a fine whistle the flowers blushed and then they hushed showing off their beauty as they swayed in it's gust wind continued on the way thinking.. what a wonderful day.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/8/2021 10:55:00 PM

Hello Phyllis ... I enjoyed your verse on wind song. The wind has so many notes to take note of - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay PS: had a virus that laid me flat (not covid) but I'm okay now,

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/15/2021 11:46:00 AM

Enjoyed, but wind with no rain is worrisome . . ..

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/16/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for your comment and yes we have the wind but no rain and more hot than usual. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2021 11:04:00 AM

- The wind sings another melody here with me ... 16 c and a lot of wind ... and we do not lack rain - A wonderful poem, Phyllis ... stay healthy my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/16/2021 1:24:00 PM

Hot hot and more hot and no rain with lots of fires but luckily none near us. Stay healthy too. love phyl

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/14/2021 6:42:00 PM

A delightful write, Phyl! It was a pleasure to read! Blessings, Kim M

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/15/2021 10:34:00 AM

Thanks Kim we have the wind but really need some rain. Very dry at the moment. love phyl