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Whistling round the corner, a spine tingling tune; In his empty belly, a low, eerie growl. Northern in the winter, howling at the moon. Desirous, hungry winds of time on the prowl. 10/23/2015 Contest: Wind Snow or Rain Sponsor: Jan Allison

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Date: 10/23/2015 11:50:00 PM
Do you need a D word for your last line to complete the acrostic, Arlene? Just wanted you to know I'd you are entering this in the contest. Your descriptions on the wind are really good! :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 10/24/2015 4:59:00 AM
Pppfffttt!!! Thanks, sweetness!....
Date: 10/23/2015 9:46:00 AM
Well done, Arlene. Having lived in Colorado I know how eerie the wind can be.
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