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Quote: And the tree said to the wind: “Leaf me alone!” -- unknown I am the invisible wind, always present but never seen I'm not just a void; I can be gentle, whispering songs through leaves I carry the sorrows of parted lovers across great distances But I'm not always gentle. raising tornadoes, leaving destruction in my wake In fields of gold, I move gracefully, causing waves of wheat to dance The fragrance of flowers is mine to carry, intoxicating all in my path I roar through mountains and valleys, uprooting trees and tearing off rooftops Often, I bring thunder and rain, casting a shadow of misery over the land In cities, I'm naughty, playing with umbrellas and lifting skirts with my gusts

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Date: 4/8/2024 4:56:00 PM
The words of the wind to our ears, Jay. Love your last line about the "naughty" wind. Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings!
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:35:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/creative "Wind" write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/6/2024 7:39:00 PM
Hearty Congratulations dear Jay on your first-place win in the contest.
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Date: 4/6/2024 9:59:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Very well penned. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/6/2024 2:17:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations in the contest, Jay :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/5/2024 4:26:00 PM
Jay, wonderfully penned, love the humor in the last line, congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 3/23/2024 3:09:00 AM
A fascinating poem Jay. The wind is versatile and yet we can see its effects although it is invisible. Your poem tells it all in a wonderful way. Well done, a thoroughly enjoyable poem. BOL
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Date: 3/22/2024 8:36:00 PM
Beautiful personification bringing out the gentle and tempestuous nature of the wind. "In cities, I'm naughty, playing with umbrellas and lifting skirts with my gusts" This last line really brought a smile to my lips. The image too is very funny. Great entry dear, Jay. All the Best!
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Date: 3/20/2024 4:14:00 PM
a lovely personification poem and a perfect entry for the contest. You gave great visuals that describe something as invisible as the wind. Well done. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 3/20/2024 1:54:00 PM
- An invisible and slightly mischievous wind, Jay :) - Great written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/20/2024 12:15:00 PM
Your poem gives a splendid voice and meaning to the wind, Jay. Wonderful images you convey. Excellent write.
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Date: 3/20/2024 12:07:00 PM
Really nicely done . Loved the naughty part.
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/creative "Wind" write. What a cute/fun picture. Love the quote... "Good Luck"  Have a wonderful day writing away................
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