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Will It Last

Beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful is she. Skin so soft and smooth that her lips are perfect for me. Love when she places her head on my chest. My chin caressing her forehead as she lays to rest. Awaking and staring deeply into ones eye. Departing falls to tears and kissing as she waves goodbye. Alone reminiscing to the moments that just past; Praying that she's the one for me But, will it last?! Pace, G "An old piece"

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Date: 8/8/2013 2:07:00 AM
I absolutely adore this poem! Very descriptive and relatable.
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Date: 7/1/2012 2:23:00 PM
That is the million dollar question!! Most of us are not millionaires lol but a few are blessed enough to be! Beautiful poem!! Really is...
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:09:00 AM
Thank you dearly sweetheart!!
Date: 6/2/2012 12:11:00 AM
Loved it any way!Carma"
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Date: 6/2/2012 12:34:00 AM
Thank you, simply an old piece!!
Date: 5/13/2012 10:09:00 AM
you know that is the issue with every relationship.there is always a maybe oh perhaps and kinder.eish
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Date: 5/3/2012 9:50:00 PM
Excellent work, yet again. You created the moment - I could see and feel it all.
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Date: 5/4/2012 3:59:00 AM
Thank you beautiful!!!

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