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WHO WAS SHE
I intuited the radiance before I even laid eyes on her Moving with a self-assured poise that came from deep within was a quintessence of a woman of ageless assurance and beauty What WAS it? That layered her with a divinity, incomparable sensuality redefined Captivated by her timeless elegance reading her essence as an omen From her brushed golden hair reflected specks strewed my path Tossing my brushes and canvas aside On this one great all-consuming quest I pursued her like an artist possessed An apparition the likes of which I only but dreamed the Universe I had implored ‘Help me to find … and achieve’ My Masterpiece had manifested Who WAS she? I followed her down winding cobbled streets through quaint little parks unhindered … free of the bustle and chaos of city life Several times, she lingered Breathing the intoxicating fragrance of rambling roses Elegant fingers caressed purple lavenders that abundantly grew. From her rosebud lips on wings of fluffy dandelions her playful wishes flew Fairy floss clouds drifted ~ melting into endless blue skies An old Oak offered respite as she reclined enjoying the sweet scent of serenity ‘Beauty is in the eye of the beholder’ they say I looked through hers and marvelled at what Nature had to offer The Quintessential Component of Time stood Still for us So entranced in that magical moment was I when a discordant cry - of a raven broke the spell Startled she turned Our eyes met ~ mortal sparks igniting ‘Be still my beating heart’ ~ I implored but it mockingly laughed Hovering playfully on sensual lips a smile danced as she beckoned On feet that grew wings I involuntarily flew Who WAS she? In a sweet, tinkling, teasing voice, she said “I’m quite aware that you have been following me”. Stunned - I just stared – rendered speechless by her porcelain skin her sun-kissed hair, her sparkling jewelled eyes her rosebud lips I lived ‘the moment’ where words were futile “No matter, sweet artist” “you want to paint my portrait - Don’t they all?” Rummaging through her handbag, she pulled out a business card and handed it to me “Come see me,” she said as she gently floated away. I looked at the card. Lariese Like music to my ears Lariese A vision without flaws Elicits the question ’Did it make her the woman she was?’ Surfacing aesthetically the radiant beauty of her natural glowing skin must also come from deep within
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 2/26/2024 2:16:00 AM
Wow. This is so beautiful., I'm blown away by your talent and excellent words. Perfect. Well done. Pete.
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:32:00 PM
Another beautiful production, Maria. A FAV for my list. I enjoyed the video and the way it was in sync with the flow of your poetry. Who was she? A glimpse into of your authentic self, or of anyone that has become aware of their authentic self, that free flowing manifestation of who our Creator intended for each of us to be. Uninhibited, fresh and free to experience the fully beauty of life and all of creation. A pleasure to experience this manifestation with you. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 2/18/2024 12:51:00 PM
Ah dear maria! Theres a sweet and captivating elegance in the way your words flow so seamlessly with breathtaking dictions and lines that truly left me in awe, mesmerized and intrigued to read whats next: and i must say like every poem of yours, this one truly touched my soul! And made my heart sing! The mellifluous nature perhaps, and delicate cadence. I especially loved “ Lariese Like music to my ears Lariese A vision without flaws Elicits the question ’Did it make her the woman she was?’“wow! How do you do that? I bet you have a beautiful mind and you see beauty in everything hence why your way of describing things is so detailed with a sophisticated touch! Your mind and soul reflects through your word weaving while this left an enigmatic character worth celebrating! Its one that truly made me go wow! Fave it is
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Date: 2/18/2024 3:45:00 AM
Who was she ? Maria of course, love xo
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Date: 2/12/2024 5:19:00 AM
Gosh, this was such a breathtaking read, beautiful Maria, I'm immensely in awe of your artistic talent! The way you've profoundly described about the importance of inner beauty and how it reflects in a person's aura, making their mortal selves look enchanting as well..Ahh, I absolutely love the depth that you've so intricately woven here.Your wordsmithery is truly, one of those styles, which I adore and admire.."From her rosebud lips..Fairy floss clouds" Woww!! Left me speechless, this is magical.. "Come see me,” she said as she gently floated away- gosh, the imagery you've painted feels like floating in front of the eyes, so delicate, tender and gorgeous. Reflecting how our inner souls reflect beauty which can be felt and perceived by those, who know the true meaning of it. This is a really mesmerizing piece and I love the philosophical touch that you've given here too. Keep writing and shining always, sending love and light :)
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Date: 2/11/2024 3:51:00 PM
A mystery woman "whose name is music to the ears," The poem is beautiful Maria, and the video is done very well, enjoyed
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Date: 2/10/2024 10:17:00 PM
This has a wonderfully poetic novel quality to it and I was captivated by the story arc. Like Rose I could not put it down, for I love a good story. Are we ending here with a question? .. We wait with baited breath, Maria ;))
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Date: 2/10/2024 9:40:00 AM
wow this is so good, I listened to the whole thing mesmerized, Love it fav. *
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/10/2024 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vie. It's always such a pleasure with your visit, and the fave is truly appreciated, my sweet friend...Hugs
Date: 2/10/2024 8:42:00 AM
This poem is a captivating exploration of beauty, mystery, and the timeless allure of a woman who seems to embody an ethereal presence.. The poem's conclusion, with Lariese's teasing acknowledgment of the protagonist's pursuit and her enigmatic departure, leaves the reader with a sense of intrigue and longing. The juxtaposition of her outward beauty with the suggestion of inner depth and complexity adds layers of meaning to the portrayal of her character.. loved it dear..
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/10/2024 9:28:00 PM
' the timeless allure of a woman who seems to embody an ethereal presence'.. Wow, what a wonderful comment. Thanks so much, dear S1.That's exactly what I was implying; true beauty must come from within. the suggestion of inner depth and complexity adds layers of meaning to the portrayal of her character, anything else is just surface...Hugs
Date: 2/9/2024 2:08:00 PM
[This is what happens to a poet who uses Lariese organics! Beautiful on the outside, but also beautiful on the inside!] Having said that, I must say that this poem is beautiful and mysterious. Lariese steals the reader's heart and he wishes he could take up her seductive offer. ~ Thank you for sharing, Maria! ~ Warm regards & happy weekend // paul
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Date: 2/15/2024 7:04:00 PM
Well SO we've never seen your face, so ...
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2024 8:42:00 AM
I use Lariese products, can you tell?
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/9/2024 10:29:00 PM
Lol, yes, you're so right, my friend. So glad you liked it, Paul. The man reading for me is very talented. Among other things, he is a backup singer for Cliff Richards. Did you recognise the girl? She's the same one in The Gangster...Hugs
Date: 2/9/2024 7:29:00 AM
I was so intrigued I looked up the name Lariese. I could only find a line of skin care products. I think your poem and video are spectacular. It has a haunting quality. “I can’t help falling in love with you” is a nice touch.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/9/2024 10:31:00 PM
Another way of spelling it is Lareese. Thanks so much Richard, so glad you liked it. When are you going to post your awesome videos here? Hugs
Date: 2/8/2024 3:08:00 PM
truly a captivating poem that kept me engaged until the very end. Your story is superbly written about the narrator's fascination with Lariese and her mysterious pursuit of trying to comprehend her. I loved the questions and the ending...her beauty came from within! Powerful..have a great evening, Sara
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/9/2024 10:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Sara, I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, beauty must come from within; you're so right there. Thanks for stopping by, and have a great weekend. Lots of love.xx
Date: 2/8/2024 1:40:00 PM
Much enjoyed the ride on the wings of splendid imagination, Maria. Intriguing, mystical--this quest for answers captures the reader. A FAVE from me for this wonderful exploration.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/9/2024 10:35:00 PM
Thanks so much for the visit and awesome comments always dear Vijay. So appreciate it my dear friend. Have a wonderful weekend...Hugs
Date: 2/8/2024 12:49:00 PM
Dear Maria, Your eloquent phrasing and enigmatic quest have thoroughly captivated my intellectual faculties. The artist's unwavering fixation upon the resplendent Lariese has been flawlessly depicted, thereby engendering a profound fascination within me regarding notions of aesthetics, creative longing, and the enigmatic essence of inspiration. Your adept narrative prowess and skillful infusion of lingering imbue this poetic piece with unparalleled brilliance, thanks for your comment on my page.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/9/2024 10:42:00 PM
I'm thrilled you liked it so much Soto, and you are indeed a poet of amazingly skillful language creativity yourself. I'm not on PS a lot, I wish I could be, I try, and even though I don't comment a lot, I do read all of you wonderful poets works. Very very good, keep writing always...Hugs
Date: 2/8/2024 5:51:00 AM
Awesome poem Maria. Like him, we can't helped but be intrigued by her beauty. Lovely video too.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/8/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Tommy, I'm so glad you liked it. She's the same girl in 'The Gangster' video actually. Totally different role here. She gets around Lol....Hugs
Date: 2/8/2024 5:50:00 AM
I felt as if I were in some quaint Italian village in the heart of Tuscany. Magnificent descriptions are worthy of a POTD.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/8/2024 6:04:00 AM
So glad you liked it my dear Victor. Its actually a park in UK, the cobbled path is Hyde Park Mews in London, when we visited there last. You should go, its beautiful, but perhaps Tuscany could possibly be closer. Would love to go there myself...Hugs
Date: 2/8/2024 5:13:00 AM
Dear Maria, You captivated me with your evocative words and mysterious pursuit. The artist's obsession with the radiant Lariese is beautifully rendered, leaving me enthralled with questions of beauty, artistic yearning, and the elusive nature of the muse. Your masterful storytelling and lingering ambiguity make this poem a true gem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/8/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and viewing the video Daniel, and the awesome comment. So glad you liked it...Maria

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