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White Or Red?

White by name straw of hue a light bouquet draped temptingly in beads of condensed cool a glass or two to share between two halves becoming one as passions turn to red warm spices fruity notes vanillas blush enraptured in the realms of paradise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 9:51:00 AM

Gosh, Sharon, again I have run out of poems of yours to view. Loved this one though so I came back to it. lUv, Andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/5/2010 6:20:00 AM

Beautiffuly write, Sharon! And best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for your kind comments and enjoy your day!..Ger:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/4/2010 1:25:00 AM

Hi Sharon :) Upon seeing your title, I knew this had to do with wine ;) Really enjoyed how your tetractys developed from white to red passion--beautiful & romantic tetractys :) thanks again for your suggestions in my tetractys, it did work better -- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2010 9:20:00 PM

A very interseting approach to the tetracyts. Very clever. Did you see Nikko's? Wow. The recent ones I am seeing are really fine! I'm happy you wanted to copy that kiddie poem. LUv, Andrea

Kris Walters

Date: 8/2/2010 8:35:00 PM

Love these tetractys- beautifully done, sensual. I love "fruity notes" and "vanillas blush" Thank you for your lovely comments and the favorite thing- much appreciated! Hugs, kris