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Whispers of Love

The local priest asked me to pray I did but I had doubt For a while I lost my way and I was holding out . For me there could be no relenting I had yet to learn how to grieve There could be no repenting because I had ceased to believe . I was angry and hurting and to my eternal shame From the truth I won't be skirting Even the good lord got the blame. In my mothers house feeling sorry for myself Sorting through the things that charities might sell I reached up to the cupboards top shelf and my mum's favourite CD fell. Then and there on the radio I heard her favourite hymn '' how great thou art '' Why I started to cry i'll never know but I opened up my heart . In the car on my way home Tears streaming down my face That hymn now played for me alone The good Lord I once more embrace . I know my mother is happy in her new residency and is now an angel in heaven high above To me that song was her sending me The whispering of a mothers love . I've opened my heart and found my way Though I admit I'm just a man but now when I kneel down to pray I know the Good Lord understands. By Darren Watson 01/04/2014 For the Whispers of love contest. Sponsor . Gail Angel Doyle.

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Date: 7/10/2014 6:01:00 PM
Just come across this one Darren a wonderful picture of the man you are shows a sense of vulnerability few would share. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2014 5:53:00 AM
Wonderfully great Darren ! loved this one especially the first two n the last stanzas ,,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/20/2014 3:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your well deserved 7th place, Darren - Have a great day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 9:10:00 PM
A gentle and loving piece Darren...Congrats on the win
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Date: 4/9/2014 6:29:00 PM
love your poem beautiful
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Date: 4/2/2014 1:21:00 AM
wow, this is SO good, Darren. Showing a vulnerable side to yourself willing to submit to the Lord. To just pray and be able to find solace. Gail should love this one!!
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Date: 4/1/2014 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your heart, Darren. God meets us at an unexpected place, at a moment when we need him the most but He always finds us. Yours is truly a blessing :)
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Darren Watson
Date: 4/1/2014 10:49:00 AM
I'm not a deeply religious man Toquyen , I don't need a church to pray but I do pop into York minster now and again , There is a quiet corner there where I can pour my heart out , Thank you for the comment.

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