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Whisper

Whisper , when the morning's loneliness Wraps me in a blanket of despair When memories are fading fast And I'm caught between the Present and the past, Whisper, as balmy breezes cause Gentle ripples on still waters of the bay The same bay that held reflections Of us at play , before the angles took you away. Whisper in the evening's darkness When the moon illuminates my room And I lay awake watching shadows of Treetops dance eerily on the walls Until sleep trips me to fall. Whisper , to me as sleep images take me to A labyrinth of dreams , filled with Kaleidoscope scenes, pushing me Through the long lonely night into The morning light. Whisper , whisper ,whisper , until it occurs To me your aura will remain.

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Date: 3/22/2016 6:05:00 PM
What a wonder use of repetition and a very emotional poem. Nicely done Ann
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:10:00 PM
Whisper...a lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 3/3/2016 6:34:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup with words so touching, I read on hoping for resolution; and then light of morning and aura reflects thoughts of everlasting love that soothes. Such wonderful tribute from you to your Mom. You're in for delightful surprises by other poets.
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Date: 3/2/2016 12:28:00 AM
Ann ,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ann Bernstine
Date: 3/2/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thank you !

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