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Whisper

A whisper sits softly upon my lips   waiting patiently to seduce your ear   it thrums, it beats and it echos   hoping that you'll soon be near   It's gentle like the daybreak   as it caresses your very being   craving to gnaw upon your body   seducing every want and need   it wraps around your supple fortress   hiding deep inside your empty nest   suckling upon all of your goodness   with every rise of your bountiful chest     it grabs your hips and pulls you closer   and listens intently as you speak   knowing all of your deepest secrets   devouring with simplicity, both so weak

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Date: 7/29/2018 9:03:00 PM
As always your poetry shines. These are truly inspiring verses delivered by a very talented and deep kindhearted poet! A fav..
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Date: 7/29/2018 6:55:00 PM
tim, i didnt know you were such a freak....but i understand because i, too, am unique....for i am only weak to my womaned desire....thats why the threat against celibacy is so very dire....awesome write my friend....
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Date: 7/28/2018 11:18:00 PM
Oh my Tim a whisper has a lot to anwer too. Lovely lovely words ..Seren
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:13:00 PM
This is very seductive and romantic, wish men like this really existed haha
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Date: 7/23/2018 1:46:00 PM
Someone must be amusing and musing your muse in an alluring way Tim...So much passion between the lines.
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:37:00 AM
Oh my!! Many thoughts have I whispered along the page, with moments of sensuality. This is very exciting, playful, romantic and passionate. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/23/2018 12:00:00 AM
Tim, what or who has sparked your Muse.. enquirering minds want to know!! This sizzles!!
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Date: 7/22/2018 7:06:00 PM
Hot.
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Date: 7/22/2018 6:45:00 PM
wow, so sensual!!! (I believe the word is gnaw)!! You are showing great work this week!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/22/2018 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 7/22/2018 2:37:00 PM
wow you are on fire with this sensual sensation Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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