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While You'Re There

When you arrive All those there should strive to make you smile And be ready to sacrifice their chair In the hopes that you'll sit and stay a while And see you happy every moment that you're there While you're there A drunk poet sits there unprepared To express the beauty of a lady fair But being the kind person that she is She gives him ample time to declare When you leave All of those there who care about you know you're gone And they pray your absence doesn't last too long And they wonder at the moment you'll return For your happiness and presence do they yearn When you're gone I think of you and erect a fantasy Of you sitting there next to me And amidst the laughter, a moment when our eyes meet And we lean in and share a kiss so sweet

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Date: 5/16/2016 1:41:00 PM
Genius you've somehow worked in "erect" here without being too lewd.
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:46:00 AM
I like this #clever
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:58:00 AM
Brett, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2016 7:56:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brett.
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Date: 4/25/2016 10:49:00 PM
Brett,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/25/2016 11:59:00 PM
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Book: Shattered Sighs