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Where the Streets Are Full of Pity

Last night I met an old boxer in an alley of cardboard; he seemed glad to see me, shouted me over for a fight, I told him ‘Hey mate, I’m not in your league’ ‘Young man.’ He said with glint of victory in his solid brown eyes. ‘That’s alright, I suppose you’re going to leave cos the forecast is for rain, you in your fine mansion, mine here, just a bloody pain. But then I guess, that’s okay for a foolish old tramp.’ lonesome sadness blues through the lips of the city… the eyes are windows He told me ‘What’s the price of glory if one is shackled to the past. Even my wife left me, took my purse in pursuit of another man. To think I really loved her, gave her all that I could, the witch hankered for the final count, then left me where I stood’ He rambles on discursively ‘One day I’ll roam within my native Devon, where I’ll chase those illusive dreams back into heaven. Its years of abusing whisky years of perpetual hoar frosts that hones this savage beast.’ this fight on its knees many blind eyes a mismatch… all have a story ‘How do you think I feel in these chains of formal sorrow, replaying each vintage year each round like no tomorrow, each morning still, I count the homeless, watch the van collect the corpse. Man, I need a second chance to come out gamely fighting, repay life’s referee, society the uninviting.’ incompatible metabolism a stray… unfriendly advice His bottle runs dry, his words begin to wound. Here, In God’s own country left high wide and marooned. Yet like the mortal flame he submits to the desolate night, the municipal van empowered to administer the ultimate rite. No dawn able to invigorate leaves this empty feeling in me, only the morning dew edulcorates while a soul in hell is set free. careful where you tread mats to wipe one’s feet upon… look down you may see Entered sponsor Mark Toney's 2022 Marathon 19 poem converted from free verse to haibun 2022 3/11/2022

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Date: 10/3/2022 11:21:00 AM
Harry , you really poured out your poetic soul in this one.Haibun form really suits you and you got some amazing comments for this poem. Can't believe I missed this earlier.
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Date: 9/19/2022 5:51:00 PM
Amazingly Beautiful Poetry Harry. Let the truth be revealed, even in its most heinous forms. Some people are lucky enough to live in luxurious homes, while others are doomed to spend their lives in shacks or tents. What a jarring contrast to the norm! A fave for me.
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Date: 9/8/2022 2:42:00 PM
Wow! That's incredible. And yes, why are the homeless ignored or used to wipe our feet on. I especially love your last line. Wonderful write, Harry!
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Date: 9/2/2022 2:54:00 AM
Good Morning hh. Always are you the humanitarian. Always do you leave the reader a better person for seeing and reading your words because we do see them too. I found this powerful and very expressive within the manner of your formatting and execution. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful morning. Blessings now and always.
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Date: 9/1/2022 8:50:00 AM
The plight of the homeless vagabonds are so touchingly described. While some live in fine mansions, some others are destined to be confined to a shack or a tent ! What incongruous disparity ! Touchingly written with beautiful haikus, dear harry. Great Haibun
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Date: 9/1/2022 2:04:00 AM
Reading this makes me all the more compelled to fulfill my mission of life-building by the grace of the Lord. Thanks for sharing, and thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 8/31/2022 10:41:00 PM
The chains will always be lying around Harry It's who picks them up, and for what reason? That's the crux, of things, they can be self Affixed again or put upon new subject..By those Who mete out injustuce, today like the corrupt Occupiers In administration currently, as long as The tax is paid; hey.'
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Date: 8/31/2022 9:42:00 PM
Incredible Poetry Harry. Truth be told in its darkest forms. What an earth shattering piece. Wow! thanks for shairng my friend...
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Date: 8/31/2022 4:38:00 PM
Amazing story of truth told in this soulful Haibun, Harry. Thanks for telling it so well and using this form of poetry my friend. Hope all is well. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 8/31/2022 11:33:00 AM
Harry, your amazing poem provides insight into the sadness and despair which ensues after a life has taken many wrong turns. It seems life should hold more second chances. Best wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 8/30/2022 5:04:00 AM
Harry, your style is inimitable! Incredible imagery abounds while the story is so keenly unfolded! This is an awesome write! Happy Tuesday!!!
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Date: 8/29/2022 1:01:00 PM
Awesome haibun, Harry. :-)
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Date: 8/29/2022 10:53:00 AM
Wow Harry, so descriptive. Unleashed emotions on display carried on sad notes of melancholy. Wonder Write. Your heart is deep and your vision full here. So powerful. Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 8/29/2022 9:36:00 AM
Wow Harry that is amazing….so beautifully penned and so sad! Debx
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Date: 8/29/2022 8:29:00 AM
Rather sad. To lose one's wife and have his money stolen, ending homeless. Bet he is not alone in such situations. Why can't the rich provide for those who have nothing.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/29/2022 8:48:00 AM
Well said Victor, I fully agree.
Date: 8/29/2022 6:23:00 AM
A heartbreaking scene and story is excellently shown in your outstanding haibun my dear friend Harry. So sad that those who're shackled in their bitter past allow themselves to be totally devastated. This is so true to many places and streets nowadays. I was moved by your lines my dear friend. I like your habun very much with haikus that are marvelously crafted. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm so glad to read from you too. God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 8/29/2022 6:16:00 AM
Your poem gives voice to many who lead empty lives. Wonderfully conveyed, Harry.
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Date: 8/29/2022 5:09:00 AM
Living on their past Harry, is sometimes all that keeps the unfortunate going, but alas the moment is gone, no way back or second chance, for the washed up one here, too much physical and mental damage done, a brilliant moving Haibun, cheers David
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Date: 8/29/2022 3:46:00 AM
It is sad that for many in our world addiction to something takes hold of their life and keeps them in bondage. I enjoyed reading your work about the topic. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2022 2:45:00 AM
Sadly many don't get that second chance Harry, the days of glory long gone. Greetings from Spain Tom
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