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When You Return

Five more nights till you return Burn Baby Burn Last time your hand slid across my skin Quiverin' and Shiverin' When you return I will drink you in Skin to Skin Four more nights till you return Burn Baby Burn You turned me into a river Lover oh Lover When you return I will consider To Swim Upriver Three more nights till you return Burn Baby Burn You made me see how deep it feels Head over Heels When you return I will lay at your feet My Every Need Two more nights till you return Burn Baby Burn Slide on closer and closer Over and Over When you return your mouth and hands My Body's Demands One more night till you return Burn Baby Burn Tomorrow we will travel far Find Who We are You will return to a raging fire Higher and Higher

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Date: 10/19/2015 8:14:00 AM
Love this...as the tension builds in every verse. Very well done!
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Date: 3/31/2014 10:09:00 AM
PINS PINES SPINES THE DRAGON, THE COINS, THE POISON THE POWER OF THE REAL WOMAN WILL NEVER HIDE BEHIND A MASK, HER FORTUNE THE FERTILITY OF THE PURE, THE MATERIAL WHICH SHE WEARS OVER TENDER SKIN, A WOMAN WHO IS TRULY BEAUTIFUL DOES NOT SURROUND HERSELF WITH BEASTS NO SWORDS LOVE INSIDE HER BRAVE HEART THE OCEAN AND THE MOON ARE WAITING. THE TIDE IS IN. POISE, PATIENCE, HEART, BRAVERY, TRUTH THE TENDER LOVING WOMAN NEVER COMPETES.
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Date: 1/15/2014 8:25:00 PM
Wow, Great poem Sandra. The feeling that we yearn from that one, is deeply expressed in this piece. Amazing choice of imagery, and setting for this piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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