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When Rhyming Reigns

Sun smiles - withering flowers bloom; Sky sprinkles - bowers gleefully bathe; Breeze breathes - lovers merrily hum, And rhyming heals all our aching woes. Moon snorts wearing a woolen cloud; Darkness now floods – drowning all, And eerie spirits stride, hunting for mirth, Yet rhyming’s reign can rescue us all. When peace twinkles in poetic lines, And sprinklers overflow the poetic tanks, I see readers swim in butterfly stroke, And then I know that a poet’s duty is done. *A 2nd Place*in the following contest (judged on Nov. 6, 2020) Nov. 1, 16, 2020 HM's and NA's October 2020 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/8/2020 5:24:00 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, for this great placement!!
Date: 11/6/2020 5:17:00 PM
Newton, your poem overflows with amazing imagery. I'm especially impressed with; "Moon snorts wearing a woolen cloud" - so wonderful! Your poem is a sensory feast. Congratulations for your fine win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/6/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this impressively great comment and the complement!!
Date: 10/16/2020 8:45:00 PM
Newton, how truly beautiful!!! A sturdy entry indeed! Love the cloud puffed by moon, drowning dark, spirits stride, scarf wrapped moon. All in one stanza - third stanza is equally magnificent, I would just rewrite it here. Brilliant! You are so talented
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Date: 10/17/2020 4:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this wonderfully great comment and the complement!!

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