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When Love Was Innocent

Sing for me the sweetest song of love when life was still so young. Those tender times and days devoid of cares and wants troubling the old, when smiles and laughter ruled the day, when worries passed and did not stay. Strum so softly your guitar just like the nights along the shore when music meant the world to us and dreams were spun with so much fun. With nary a thought to hindrances, and silence in between did not mean sadness. Sketch the image once again of all our hopes and aspirations. Paintbrush, our imaginations that fueled all our conversations. Let the canvas capture the moment when each one’s triumph was heaven sent. With words of wonder I will write of every look and all the sighs, of every throbbing thud within our hearts that sometimes drown the din. Still, we aimed our sight so high a desire defined by what’s ideal... When life was young, and love was innocent.
16 May 2015 Kim Patrice Nunez When Love Was Innocent Contest

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Date: 10/8/2015 1:48:00 AM
Awesome write Kim! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 10/8/2015 12:33:00 AM
Tender expressions about love and what love means to us as we age... Beautifully written, Kim. Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 10/8/2015 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Kelly! hugs!
Date: 10/3/2015 10:04:00 AM
Hi Kim, stopping back again to congratulate on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/8/2015 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra! hugs!
Date: 10/2/2015 10:47:00 PM
Kim, it's nice to see this one with a new placement. Congrats!!!!! LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:07:00 AM
Kim, this is so beautiful and flows like music. "...when smiles and laughter ruled the day when worries passed and did not stay.." Yes, such emotional reflections for sure we can all share. Congratulations on receiving the nice placement your poem deserves! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/1/2015 7:39:00 PM
What a beauty this is.....I almost feel it should be set to music !! Congratulations dear Kim!
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:43:00 PM
Kim nice win!
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Date: 6/11/2015 9:16:00 AM
Reads like a winner I enjoyed the use of internal rhyme! Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2015 4:09:00 PM
Beautiful words to a fragile nostalgic concept. A time that all who grow old reminisce upon.
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Date: 5/29/2015 2:53:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Kim, what an absolute joy to read this Friday evening, hugs, James :)
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:49:00 AM
Your writings I deeply commend Kim. I'm deeply moved by this.
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:07:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:47:00 AM
Hi Kim, This is a very rhythmic streaming piece that flows like of soft river of words. Very nice, smooth and a clear 7 rating with my pleasure. Have a wonderful day. Earl
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Date: 5/27/2015 11:32:00 AM
Your words delicate, yet so strong and layered with emotion. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/24/2015 6:54:00 AM
This is very beautiful, Kim. It does have a lovely cadence to it. :) Young love has it's own special flavor as you have depicted so aptly. Lovely. Hugs
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Date: 5/23/2015 9:34:00 AM
Oh sweet innocence. Congratulations on the win. You are extraordinary Blessings Edith
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Date: 5/21/2015 11:17:00 PM
"With nary a thought to hindrances, silence in between did not mean sadness."...love it Kim... so captivating. I also really like the lines, "Paintbrush, our imaginations that fueled all our conversations."...wow... your word choice is very unique. Congrats on your win by the way! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/21/2015 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kim.
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Date: 5/20/2015 7:31:00 PM
A beautiful poem to reminisce with. Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 5/20/2015 12:48:00 PM
well, this is simply charming and dreamy, kim... sweet congrats!super galing!
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Date: 5/19/2015 8:50:00 PM
beautiful write a 7, congratulations on your win hugs
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Date: 5/19/2015 5:34:00 PM
Really good, and a resultant H M Kim..'
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:34:00 AM
KIM:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/18/2015 3:47:00 PM
Those were the days, Kim!! So nice of you to take me back in time when "life was young, and love was innocent". A lovely musical poem that merits a top 7 rating. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/18/2015 3:07:00 PM
This is such a great nostalgic piece, Kim! "when music meant the world to us and dreams were spun with so much fun" As a teenager this is life! Hope this does well! ~Jan
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