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When It Blows, It Grows

I picked up a couple of dried leaves From the cold ground Three of them I analyzed them I felt the edges so smooth Untouched Innocent I closed them on my hand and crushed them I opened my hand and watched them They lay there As they did on the ground Untouched Unmoved, I put my hands together with the already crushed leaves and rubbed them Into smaller pieces Smoother Untouched Innocent Just there. .... Maybe there's something wrong When one sees life in lifeless things When one sees beyond the green they once had Maybe it's an issue When we don't Maybe it's a problem To be so From the depth of my lungs I blew the particles And watched Them Blow away Falling smoothly Back to the cold ground Innocently Touched Spreading out everywhere Blown, another growth Probably of another thing, a cycle of life When it grows, it blows

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:00:00 AM
Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/7/2016 12:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Funom. I sooo much appreciate the visit:-)
Date: 12/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
Lovely poem Njeri, well written with a very introspective feel.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/24/2015 8:49:00 AM
thank you James, i appreciate the visit

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