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When I See You Again

Let me tell it one more time, When one more chance I see your smile. That days and months when you were gone. My life was so emptied , no secs I didn't cry. My heart is bleeding, can barely beat. Since you've left me here in empty space. But when I see you again,I'll tell you this. I love each day we were laughing, When we argue and fall asleep, crossed-legs. I love it when you brush my hair with those fingertips. Down to my neck, a gently softest kiss. Then we both lie barely naked wrapped with wild embrace. I remember one day beside the beach. You put a ring in my finger, and teardrops fell down my cheeks. You're the sweetest person at that moment , Then you knelt down and took my hand. I wore the promise of endless love,I believed in forever. One rainy night , we argued too bad. You left and ride in your car ,the last time I saw my guy. When I woke up in the morning, I almost have to die. I see your face in every news, you're such a superstar. Wish that I could see you again, for once. To tell you , I love you ,that forever you're mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2018 5:04:00 AM
Ooh, how teary, sad and absolutely beautifully penned. You have such a gift for emotions that have the reader feeling as if they are their own. The attention to detail is amazing and paints a vignette that is profound in its impact. Gorgeous writing. Thinking of you Aiyah and sending smiles and hugs that the stars are twinkling brightly and happily in your sweet world. love and blessings xox
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:41:00 PM
A sad poem filled with longing yet its good. -JT
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Date: 5/11/2015 1:03:00 AM
Wow yor love is a superstar in the news! Whats his name? This poem was adorable and appealing. U wrote it in lovely blank verse style. Thanx for sharing. Nice to read frm u again.
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:34:00 AM
You write from the heart my dear friend, Aiyah. Another excellent write from you. Hope you're doing well always and wishing you a very wonderful Mother's Day! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 5/6/2015 11:06:00 AM
incredibly composed with a tinge of nostalgia... this is so riveting, aiayah.. ang galing ng pinas!.. huggs
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Date: 5/5/2015 11:23:00 AM
Hello, Aiyah. So happy I saw your poem today. This, however is so sad and written in such a straightforward manner that the reader feels almost there with you. As Dave said, I hope this is fiction. Spill ink! Kim :)
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