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When Caught In the Wreck of Her Gaze

II And did his rash actions give this prince Cause, in moments of troubling quietude, To ruefully ponder on all which could not Be rewound? A lamentable lack of honourableness and Uncemented fortitude Which brought those crashing towers down; An inevitability borne from the desperation Of his passions... So unlike her own desperate passions contained Inside the hapless extremities of a single gaze. Her obvious compliance; the tawdriness of this Sordid contract enabling an old-fashioned Demand for dutiful obedience...but still betrayed By a resigned sort of hopelessness. The futility of a Guilt; his schoolboy-pawing of the tensioned strap; Your revulsion; his constant bolstering...the Belittling with that inane, maddening, witless chat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/22/2019 12:26:00 PM
Wow I gotta slow down and cherish these writes! Until we speak again kind sir!;) Kisses!;)
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Date: 6/20/2018 10:25:00 AM
This my friend is without any doubt in my mid, top class poetry. Its depths of thought and truth about human nature and this world's good and bad interactions between people spot on my friend.. A gem I am fav'ing..
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John Fleming
Date: 6/24/2018 2:11:00 PM
Robert, my dear friend, please accept the delay in replying -- a sincere apology! And thank you, Robert, for taking the time to visit and leave such lovely comments...I am, as always, most grateful. My very warmest regards. :) john
Date: 4/13/2018 9:59:00 AM
A passionate dialogue..deeply felt emotions..well written, John.
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:19:00 PM
Vijay...your comments are truly always quite lovely! You are very much appreciated I can assure you - many thanks! Your good friend :) john

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