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It had been a long time since she had peeked Into the future using the tea leaves, Happy to accept what each day wreaked, Aware that foreknowing oft deceives. Into the future using the tea leaves, One morn she accidentally looked; Aware that foreknowing oft deceives, The cup sitting unwashed as she cooked. One morn she accidentally looked, Across the sink and down the insides, The cup sitting unwashed as she cooked, Eager to share each secret it hides. Across the sink and down the insides, New grandchildren she saw in the cup, Eager to share the secrets it hides, Whispering the dame ought to wise-up. New grandchildren she saw in the cup, Many happy weeks and sad days too, Whispering the dame ought to wise-up; For the years she had left were few. Many happy weeks and sad days too, She smiled and gave the cup a rinse, For the years she had left were few, Past cares completed, few fears to evince. She smiled and gave the cup a rinse, Happy to accept what each day wreaked; Past cares completed, few fears to evince, It had been a long time since she had peeked. 2/6/2017

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Date: 1/21/2019 4:44:00 AM
Cecelia, I see this poem was written almost two years ago. It is as beautiful today as it was then. I love this site for this reason - 1. I can read poems like this years after they are posted, and 2. It reminds me we are all leaving a legacy for later generations. I may have to become a lifetime member after realizing this. The tea leaf prophetess would fit into my life exceedingly well. I have known of a grandchild coming ahead. And it is terrific, even when there is no tea.
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Date: 7/4/2017 8:22:00 PM
Cecelia, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~*
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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
Date: 7/4/2017 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Eve for running an inspiring contest and introducing me to a new form.
Date: 7/4/2017 8:32:00 AM
Very nicely told ... all seers find out that the future isn't cast in stone....but in the hearts of those who share a cup of tea...great write Cecelia
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Date: 6/3/2017 9:15:00 PM
Looks like a contender to me. Good job.
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Date: 6/2/2017 4:46:00 PM
I think the Pantoum form works well for this story, Cecelia. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry
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Date: 6/2/2017 4:36:00 PM
I love the challenge of the pantoum form and you have written a charming example Cecilia - gosh I've not used in tea leaves in many years its tea bags these days!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2017 8:40:00 AM
Wonderful, Cecelia! Great job with a very challenging form:)
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Date: 6/2/2017 8:16:00 AM
beautifully done Cecelia....
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