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What Time Succumbs To

Left open new Towards the blue Working anew Showing a few Becoming wonder Left to blunder About the yonder Golden to ponder Simple satisfy She is so fly I become alive Though it may die She succumbs To the bums Of life’s hums Enormous scums Freedom elicits Whatever permits Shortwave complicit There’s a deficit Her eyes don’t lie She doesn’t deny I want to cry But cannot scry Left alone She bones Her left scone Now belongs To nothing more Than a shore Of trinkets galore Time takes a snore Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/1/2017 6:33:00 PM
russell, you are on a roll with varied forms... what a remarkable piece in the best of rhyming scheme.. time is on your side when it comes to greeeat poetry.. huggs
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:23:00 PM
Wonderful monorhyme, Russell.. it is not the easiest to write.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/1/2017 8:13:00 AM
Perfect follow to reading SO's poem...nicely done
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:56:00 AM
Time waits for no man Russell.. Nice rhyme and flow to this..
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:43:00 AM
I wish time would take a snore. It's passing by much too quickly. Your monorhyme lines were fun to read, Russell.
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:36:00 AM
A rhythmic depiction of love and romance--your poem flows with emotion Russell!
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