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In time silent ripples wave more quiet than sound less melodic than water wash ashore, arrange green garments in motion rock in trance spoken sound colours circles interlinks spirals reaches touches fingers on keyboard grows larger evolves into lines expands meaning sentences arranged into images for your eager mind *** July 2, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/17/2017 10:18:00 PM

Yes my friend. You chose a very beautiful example of silent ripples to describe the beauty of poetry. Have a nice day.

Darren White
Date: 10/18/2017 12:32:00 AM

Thank you, have a nice day too :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/4/2017 4:42:00 PM

Exactly Darren. Need I say more. I think not because you said it wonderfully. Well done entirely.

Darren White
Date: 7/5/2017 2:03:00 AM

Thank you my friend :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/4/2017 10:45:00 AM

I really enjoyed this poem and I love the way you Arranged the words. Nicely done

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, I like shaping poems :)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/3/2017 1:09:00 PM

This is great Darren. Ripples in a pond. I like your choice of words and the feeling that our poetry has the potential to expand and touch others in so many ways. An ambitious and well written piece of poetry my friend. Regards, Dean

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 1:55:00 AM

Thank you Dean, I am very happy you like that image of expanding and touching.

Chris Green

Date: 7/3/2017 6:13:00 AM

Such a cool poem that defines poetry in shapes and phrases which is what most of us hope to accomplish when we write. This was really nice my friend.

Darren White
Date: 7/3/2017 6:16:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) That is how I always hope my poetry will reach me, but sometimes it's more like a beautiful struggle.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/2/2017 10:14:00 PM

Sweet pen :) xomo!

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:51:00 PM

Merci ma mo <3

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/2/2017 9:36:00 PM

Exquisite shape poem, my friend ... love the words even more! A Fav. I miss hearing from you - I pray all is well.

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:51:00 PM

Love the flow, Greg? Miss me? I emailed you my friend ;p

Sara Ella

Date: 7/2/2017 11:44:00 AM

That looks like fire and the words are so perfect - you paint a picture both ways! :D Nicely done! <3

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:49:00 PM

Hah, fire :) I like that. Thanks my friend :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/2/2017 9:36:00 AM

Hi Darren , this is wonderful very enjoyable read my friend :)))

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:31:00 AM

Thanks Niall!

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/2/2017 9:06:00 AM

Tranquil and serene and pleasing to the eye Darren.

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:33:00 AM

I love that wave form, thank you Elizabeth

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2017 8:53:00 AM

artful presentation and a marvelous poem as well, darren..huggs

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:33:00 AM

Nette, thank you so much!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2017 8:39:00 AM

Love how you formed your lovely poem! Very soothing! <3

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:34:00 AM

It ripples, doesn't it Kim :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/2/2017 7:30:00 AM

This is such a pleasant read this morning Darren. Very well done. :)

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 11:34:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, glad you like it :)

White Wolf

Date: 7/2/2017 6:35:00 AM

It's a living vibrant organism all right! Such a wonderful descriptive write, Duir! Did you mean to make a seahorse with your words? Or is it just me? Love it

Darren White
Date: 7/2/2017 6:38:00 AM

LOL, no :D I'll have to do something about that, that's not right haha. But thanks for loving the poem my friend.