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What Kind of Love

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go... eeCummings what kind of love you showed me love in my years on soup you (have been there always) encouraging me to broaden my view(you showed me love in a different way) my heart will never be the same if you leave (tell me you will stay) embrace me with your arms and hold me tight never letting go ('til death comes and steals me) from your grasp you showed me love 11 November Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 11/19/2019 10:28:00 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/19/2019 10:54:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. It's always a pleasure to hear from you!
Date: 11/18/2019 9:23:00 PM
Curtis congratulations on your placement! Beautiful!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/24/2019 7:59:00 PM
I will try to make that happen!;)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/19/2019 10:54:00 PM
Would like to hear from you more often!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2019 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda! It's always good to hear from you. I admire your extreme talent and am always flattered by your kind remarks to my work. You are, and have always been, an inspiration to me. I appreciate your sincere honesty, but moreover, I value and cherish your friendship!
Date: 11/18/2019 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win - good to see someone else follwd ee's aversion to capital letters
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2019 10:14:00 PM
D. W., thank you for your kind response. I just referred to ee as being a male. In my ignorance, it very well could be a female. At any rate, I made a feeble attempt at emulating their style and it got me a winning spot in Dear One's contest. WOW! Thanks for the compliment.
Date: 11/18/2019 4:48:00 PM
Curtis, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely write, I like how you wrote in the style of ee cummings, he would be proud !
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for choosing my entry as a winner. I must admit that I had never heard of ee Cummings until your contest but I am always taking chances at different stuff. I'm flattered that I may have even come close to his style.
Date: 11/18/2019 2:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great 7th place in the contest, Curtis :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2019 4:26:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise for this great news. Trying to write a poem in the style of ee Cummings was a chore all its own. To have my entry receive a 7th place win is truly an honor. Hope all is well with you. It's good to hear from you
Date: 11/14/2019 10:46:00 AM
Simple yet sweet. Very effective. Good luck in the contest. You've definitely won me over with this :)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/14/2019 10:59:00 AM
Midnight, how gracious of you in your comment. And to say I won you over with this is such a great honor. Thank you so much for this encouraging, humbling response.
Date: 11/11/2019 11:38:00 AM
Lovely poem, Curtis.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/11/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Coming from you, that means a lot. I have always admired and respected you and I cherish your friendship highly.
Date: 11/11/2019 12:05:00 AM
well done Curtis. Love is a spledid thing. Thanks for sharing
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/11/2019 1:39:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory! I made a feeble attempt to emulate ee Cummings style but I think I mailed that miserably. If I have to reformat it rather than being disqualified that will be okay. It may get HM at least. lol Thanks again for stopping by.

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