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What Do I Say

I see you over there with a smile on your face, that makes you glow and stand out to me in this place. I watch you to see if you notice my look, You make my heart ache like a fish on a hook. It's hard to approach such beauty I know, I bide my time to let my confidence grow. I try to think of something unique and special to say, but I know there's nothing that others haven't tried to play. Looking at your hair and longing to know you more, What could I possibly say that you wouldn't ignore? Your smile makes me melt in my imagination of you, One mistake could easily push you away and it's through. How could I approach you with such a beautiful attraction, I feel we could have such love all I need is a good reaction. If I can't think of something to say you can't refuse, I fear that you'll be gone forever and I would lose. Why has it got to be so hard, it can't always be, Give you my love, but my love you'll never see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/25/2014 7:33:00 AM
The eternal question "What If?
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:51:00 AM
Donald.......This is absolutely beautiful! Enthralling and sweet! :) The longing is felt in every line of this beautiful write. So glad I got to read this!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/23/2014 11:57:00 AM
Well, this reader was totally immersed! :)
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Donald Williams
Date: 4/23/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Eileen, I am so excited you enjoyed this piece. Common situations and common approaches to everyday things just gives me a challenge for the reader to visualize the imagine I give. Thanks bunches
Date: 4/23/2014 10:49:00 AM
Lol, so sweet and adoring! Like it, Donald :)
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Donald Williams
Date: 4/23/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Toquyen, I figured a change was in order haha something different this time. Thanks for stopping by :)

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