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What Becomes of Me- a Tribute To Silent One

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This piece was written as a response to the beautiful words of the poem "Ink Bleeds Only for You" by Silent One. The moment I read his poem, I imagined how I would feel if the man I love and cherish had written such words for me. Thank you, Silent One for the inspiration to turn your amazing talent into an even more amazing fantasy!

The day your pen becomes your past laid to rest and held its last shall mark the day my heart is sure of Silent ache to then endure The memory of every stroke echoed in the lines you wrote engraved remains our history our life, our love, our legacy What, you ask, becomes of me? Of all the love that came to be? Every word you ever wrote kept still within my heart of hope Hope for all the world to know the depth of love your pen would show Poetic words you left behind to guide the hearts of all mankind -Jeannie Minor Written in response to the beautifully poetic words of "Ink Bleeds Only For You" by Silent One

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John Fleming

Date: 12/31/2017 3:14:00 PM

Beautifully and skillfully penned, Jeannie. May I take this opportunity to wish you a fulfilling and contented New Year -- and my very best regards! Cheers!! :) john

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/4/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, John. Hope the new year holds peace and prosperity for you and yours as well.

Constance La France

Date: 12/21/2017 2:19:00 PM

Jeannie, totally beautiful and CONGRATULATIONS on potd too!

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, Broken Wings

Eve Roper

Date: 12/16/2017 3:47:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD ! Eve

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2017 1:22:00 PM

- Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Jeannie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:55:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/16/2017 12:05:00 PM

Lovely write Jeannie, congratulations for POTD honors...

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:54:00 AM

Thanks Charlie, nice to see you again. Happy New Year!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/16/2017 11:13:00 AM

When Silent One speaks, everyone listens because he does it so eloquently, as your poem reflects beautifully.

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Sunlite

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2017 10:08:00 AM

Oh wow... What an excellent choice for POTD... Fully deserved I must say.. A great reply to my poem..

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One. As you can see, you are admired and respected by many adoring fans!

Alex Shevchenko

Date: 12/16/2017 9:57:00 AM

Beautiful...) guys, check out my poems, I'm a newly writer, just began. And I'm not a native speaker, so I need to know your opinions, thanks a lot) sorry for advertisement, just see no other way how to show you my verses.

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:47:00 AM

Thank you, Alex. Welcome to the Soup!

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/16/2017 8:36:00 AM

WOW! Absolutely beautiful. An endearing tribute to our amazing PS friend. I love it! Hugs and smiles :)

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Akkina

Jonashea Cunningham

Date: 12/16/2017 8:08:00 AM

I love this beautiful poem is what become of me a tribute to silent one. So I like to read poem all the time.

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, Jonashea

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/16/2017 7:03:00 AM

Wonderful, wonderful :)

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen

James Swartz

Date: 12/16/2017 7:00:00 AM

This is a lovely poem and tribute for a great poet. Congratulations Jeannie!

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thank you, James

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2017 6:39:00 AM

Such a lovely tribute Jeannie to the one and only Silent One! I agree..his words are immortal. Congrats on POTD!!

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay

John Lawless

Date: 12/16/2017 6:02:00 AM

Nicely done Jeannie and I can't think of a more deserving topic...

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 9:40:00 AM

Thanks John

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/15/2017 5:28:00 AM

Very lovely, Jeannie...All the best to you

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/15/2017 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, I appreciate the visit and the comment. My best in kind to you Arturo.

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2017 5:10:00 AM

This reply is beautifully expressed, so much more poetic than mine.. I feel so honoured I inspired you to write.. The biggest compliment is that you understood my poem so well, which gives your poem so much more impetus.. A perfect reply...

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/15/2017 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Silent. Both your talent and kindness overwhelms me.

Silent One
Date: 12/15/2017 5:11:00 AM

A FAV for me also..

Amarantus Lauriere

Date: 12/14/2017 10:02:00 PM

silence for the moment gestates tremendous tribute for later. May you always have your better half indite sublime literary works for you!

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/15/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, we should all be so lucky!