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The contest title remains listed as the title for this poem. The original title was, 'Passage of a Queen'. Trains will always remain "transportation royalty". Just look at their part in building our country. The poem was born when I heard the faint sound of a train's horn as I was feeding one morning. A change of title made it perfect for the contest.  RAY

I pause and listen To your distant lonely call. Long and low it pushes Through the stillness of The early morning air To trumpet your arrival. A disturbance to the sunrise That is waking here. It whispers to the ear That knows your song. An announcement, an invitation To meet you at the crossing Where flashing lights, like soldiers Make us bow. And colored arms, like sabers Fall from attention To protect your call. Twelve –hundred horses’ nostrils flare, Huff and puff their acrid air. Steel shoes clatter as they rumble Along your private path. Your wealth follows on carts That rattle as they roll. A strand of pearls That speaks a message From a place I’ll never know. Cyrillic and artistic, Sung as love notes from a lark. A serenade to caress you as you slept. Sung by men who joined the caravan And later disembarked. I feel compelled to count them Then their romance sings A rainbow to my heart. Each message is a picture Drawn by men that love you As a colored canvas Waving with the wind. And when you pass, My world is still again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/24/2018 3:10:00 PM
Ray: I'm sure this would be a "Sheldon Cooper" favorite but I liked it too. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:07:00 AM
Congrates great poem!
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Extraordinarily beautiful, well-written...
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:22:00 AM
Just beautiful.
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Date: 2/10/2016 12:52:00 PM
I'm so pleased to see that this was a top winner!! It is so deserving !!! Well done, Ray !!!
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Date: 2/10/2016 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations for taking top prize with this amazing write.
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Date: 2/10/2016 12:18:00 AM
You paint quite a vision with your wonderfully descriptive language. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:49:00 PM
Hi Ray, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:30:00 PM
Ray, Congrats on the who I am taks! Thanks for supporting another PD contest. through SK
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Date: 2/7/2016 3:05:00 PM
Oh my goodness, Ray! This poem I think must be one of your best that I've read! I would love to know what inspired this one! It's good to see you writing more !!
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Ray Dillard
Date: 2/7/2016 7:28:00 PM
Would you believe, a lone horn from a great distance when I was feeding early one morning. Got it worked out before I came back in the house. Thanks for reading and commenting. You know I respect your opinion.
Date: 2/2/2016 4:14:00 PM
Reads like a winner for the contest..I can't guess what you are though..Maybe a king in flight..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2016 3:53:00 PM
Amazing poetry, Ray. you are at the top of your form here!!
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:50:00 PM
Sent you a soup mail!
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:58:00 PM
Ah---Ray this is the one I have been waiting for. Good, good poem. Thank you.
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:09:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, it was posted on the Poetry chat site! thats how I came across this fine piece!
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Ray Dillard
Date: 1/31/2016 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Art. I'm glad you liked it. Where is the site? How did it get there?
Date: 1/30/2016 12:02:00 AM
What a terrific poem Ray. I really enjoyed it.
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