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What Am I

What am I? Just a body that expires with its hungers and desires At both ends? - That depends What am I? A Myriad of grey brain cells Whose synapsing rings my bells Does the thinking and compute? - That I refute What am I? Made in image of a god That then decays and starts to nod Eyes that dim and bones that ache? - Must be some mistake What am I? One of the masses - not free willed Promised to have our bellies filled To be controlled for our own good? - Not for me, although some would What am I? After four score year or two Getting the hang of what to do Then be totally snuffed out? - That I doubt What am I? I am here and you are there We all got to be somewhere Seeing the world with admiration - Worth consideration What am I? Where life’s images reside In Mirror cracked from side to side Mid the taking and the putting - I am that which does the looking What am I? Maybe nothing you can touch Not of flesh and bone and such I am that which asks the question, wonders why - “What am I?

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Date: 12/4/2023 6:33:00 PM
Hope you found the other side of the mirror Geoffrey. Though you're still sorely missed this side. -Richard
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Date: 4/3/2021 11:36:00 AM
A well written piece in trying to understand one’s purpose in life and and the entire Shabang on death.
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Date: 7/17/2020 11:23:00 AM
I really like the final 2 stanzas! I was fortunate enough as a young man to experience my 'immortal part' residing for a time in this mortal vessel we call the body--but having an NDE opens up a whole other set of questions....
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Date: 6/1/2020 8:17:00 AM
The essence of our humanity is realized within contemplation. Once it is connected to The Great “I Am” we can travel beyond our earthly limitations. Well expressed poet.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/10/2020 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful response, Richard.
Date: 5/20/2020 9:22:00 PM
Love your musing on this eternal question... Keep these coming! Best always, Gershon (P.S. I am one of the masses --- of molasses. lol. Thanks, gw)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/20/2020 9:42:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Keep taking the molasses!
Date: 5/17/2020 8:50:00 PM
I really like this. And in light of what is going on in the world right now, I relate to it that way.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/18/2020 1:42:00 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback, Andrea.
Date: 5/16/2020 12:00:00 PM
The universe contains me and I contain the universe, I could hear that echo throughout your poem. What a beautiful one :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/16/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Aditi.

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