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Wet Ways

It's a universal soup for two -- The medium for all known life. A magic, elemental, H2O stew. In fat storm-puffs of water rife. Breathing in and over the world: In a rare, thirsty-desert deluge; On peaks of snow, wind-whirled; Beneath the streets it rises, huge. Where you live, it rains and smells. That Ozone-fresh feels the best.... Listen to trillions of droplet-knells, A sizzling, misty downpour fest. Drooping drips of splats and sound. The pitter-patter of sidewalk echoes, Extending from rain-soaked ground. A poet paints water-of-life frescoes.... August 11, 2016

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Date: 8/19/2016 7:14:00 PM
A creative poem that delights all of the senses while reading... I enjoyed this very much, Tom. Great rhyming! Congrats on your win, as well!
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/23/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly!
Date: 8/16/2016 6:29:00 AM
Very creative Tom, nice rhyme very original,"water of life frescoes" well done, congrats on a fine win!
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/16/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats, John. :-)
Date: 8/15/2016 9:54:00 PM
Creative imagery in your 'rain' poem, Tom. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/15/2016 10:48:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. :-)
Date: 8/15/2016 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tom, thank you for entering my contest ! Hug Eve
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/15/2016 9:40:00 PM
You're welcome, Eve -- and, thanks for stopping by. :-)
Date: 8/15/2016 5:00:00 PM
Tom, very creatively written, and great flow...congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/15/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, Laura! ;-)
Date: 8/14/2016 6:19:00 PM
Smart and fun.
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/14/2016 6:51:00 PM
Thanks, Tom, for stopping by on this horribly hot August day. ;-)
Date: 8/11/2016 10:07:00 PM
i love th rain too
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