Weeds

When you plant good seeds watch out for weeds. They will try to supersede and snuff out all good deeds. Because weeds grow to impede and to do misdeeds. Once freed the weed will proceed to take the lead and have you treed indeed. So take heed, when you plant your seeds, watch for weeds, if you feed, they will breed and will make you concede. Proofread, then proceed with Godspeed.

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David Smith

Date: 6/22/2022 4:06:00 PM

Very true. My mothers motto was the more flowers the less weeds. My Father worked for the north Canterbury Nassella Tussock board here in NZ in 60's and 70's. was a tough time for Farmers. Farms were even taken over in bid to get rid of that weed. Concrete Jungles produce weeds with roots and weeds with feet. Important poem well presented. Most should get to the last line. Best regards David in NZ