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Weather Vane

I asked the spring its name It answered only to the Weather vane Their secret conversation Carried on the wind, while Fading stars, in dawns Volcano sky, wondered Deep why weather cocks Can’t fly?

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Date: 3/20/2016 2:26:00 PM
There is raw talent contained within these lines, Peter. Like Ted Hughes once said: "Whatever you choose to write about - Write as if you were it". The last verse demonstrates the short of creative imagination that most "Poets" on this site do not, sadly, possess. My very best regards...my friend. :) john
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