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Written, May 09, 2024
For the Contest, A New Funny or Bawdy Limerick
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin

Why I Love to Travel With My Mom | Glamour

Mom and I liked to go on country drives, she drove fast and I feared for our lives; we got lost most of the time, in lush scenery sublime; Oh, don't worry ! 'Cause we always survives ! Down long winding roads many farms we passed, but because they were a blur I looked fast; we sped by brown mooing cows, and startled farmers on ploughs; later, I exclaimed . . . Mom that was a blast !

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Valsa George

Date: 5/11/2024 10:17:00 PM

Traveling through country roads enjoying cows grazing in farms and the scenery with one's mother is a delightful experience. The drive in breakneck speed cutting the air, sometimes happens without our knowledge when we are in high spirits, though it can be dangerous.

Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2024 3:32:00 PM

Valsa, thank you for the comment, yes, it was dangerous but that was my mom ! She did slow down eventually when I told her I would not get in the car with her unless I drove, hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2024 4:25:00 PM

Enjoyed the humor that isn't really humor when you think about it. So dangerous was the speeding even though we all do it from time to time. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I appreciate the honor given me by being on your winners' list. Sara K

Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2024 3:34:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the comment, we never had an accident but I started refusing to drive with her, so she slowed down, hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/10/2024 3:41:00 PM

two delightful Limericks, Constance. I thought my mom was the only one who got lost during country drives! :-) Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2024 3:10:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment, lol, we always got lost and loved it, thanks for the encouragement, hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 5/10/2024 10:12:00 AM

A nice poem on Mother's day. Enjoyed the story.

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2024 3:11:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/9/2024 7:11:00 PM

enjoyed yann

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2024 7:20:00 AM

Yann, thank you for the compliment, hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/9/2024 5:20:00 PM

Dear Constance, your poem artistically captures the essence of a special bond between a mother and child, navigating life's twists and turns together. I loved how the blend of fear and exhilaration in the country drives mirrors the complexities of love and trust. Yet, even in uncertainty, there's strength in companionship, and resilience in the face of challenges. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2024 7:21:00 AM

Daniel, thank you for the wonderful comment, and compliment, I miss my mom so much and our country drives, appreciate, blessings