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Waves

Staring at the ocean as waves wash endlessly upon the sandy shore a timeless rythym methodical beats lapping endlessly on the shore surging and reclining in non ending repetition lulls you into a sleepy trance once in a while a spray takes you by surprise the calmness can fool the change immediate dark and dangerous raging and foaming the once calm wild with anger rocking and tossing waves at great height that can take a life.

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Date: 11/12/2020 12:49:00 PM
Surely peace and calamity both come from the sea!
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Date: 11/8/2020 3:13:00 PM
Hello Phyllis , I like the sound of the waves. To me it is calming. Yes it could be rough at times to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/9/2020 10:06:00 AM
Hello Phyllis, yes the waves could go either way. It is like summer for the month of November. I love it! Love, Darlene Enjoy your week to.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/9/2020 7:44:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Darlene. Waves are calming but when we come to storms they look very dangerous. Have a wonderful week. love phyl
Date: 10/18/2020 11:18:00 AM
Phyllis, wonderful writing, I could feel and hear those waves _Constance
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/9/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Constance. Getting lots of snow at the moment here in Regina. Need to get out and shovel this morning before it piles on some more. Have a wonderful day. love phyl
Date: 10/14/2020 7:32:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … the sea is a soul unto itself that offers so much but can also take so much, therefore it is unpredictable. A nice picture poem Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/9/2020 7:47:00 AM
Thanks my friend and thinking of you while we are getting a lot of snow and wishing for warm weather. love phyl
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/19/2020 10:43:00 AM
Thanks my friend hope all is well down under. Getting a few flakes of snow an not ready for winter for sure. love phyl
Date: 10/14/2020 10:52:00 AM
I can see myself seeing just as you so eloquently describe. Beautiful!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/19/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Michael. love phyl
Date: 10/12/2020 6:34:00 AM
- Powerful waves, Phyllis ... great written :) - Hope everything is well with you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/19/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Annelise we are getting a few flakes of snow today and not ready for winter yet. love phyl
Date: 10/8/2020 8:42:00 AM
Deep thoughts and philosophical... nice poem Phyllis..
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/10/2020 3:31:00 PM
Thank you S1. Have a great weekend. love phyl

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