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Wautoma The stillness of a gentle breeze. The rustling of the fallen leaves. Sun shines through the naked trees. Flowers being pollinated by the bees. Ashes waft up from the fire pit, Where last night a large fire was lit. Lunch cooked on an open fire. Birds in a line perched on a wire. Surrounded by the clean, frseh air. The wind swirls and styles my hair. Water pumped up from the ground. Food grows in abundance all around. The smell of smoke mixed with pine. It's peaceful here, i'm feeling fine.

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Date: 10/10/2018 9:00:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 9/16/2018 5:57:00 PM
Very peaceful thoughts in your lovely Rhyme, Alycia! Congrats on your Podium win. Sandra
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Alycia Wheatley
Date: 9/17/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
Lovely Alycia! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : )
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Alycia Wheatley
Date: 9/15/2018 5:36:00 PM
I'm so surprised! Thank you.
Date: 9/14/2018 9:43:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your podium finish with this beauty, Alycia.
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Alycia Wheatley
Date: 9/15/2018 5:36:00 PM
I'm blushing. Thank you.
Date: 8/31/2018 4:50:00 PM
You took me there with this refreshing and inspiring verse on the beauty and blessings of Nature. I could smell the smoke dancing as it curls around the pines.. A gem and a fav my friend..
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Date: 8/30/2018 4:28:00 PM
A lovely rhyme. Great finishing couplet too. I love the smell of certain trees, especially like pine.
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