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Waterfall Chandeliers

Listen to the ticking hands of twilight, close your eyes, while I take your thoughts to an ivory reverie of flickering fantasies… there I’m cruising above an island of mystery in a flying glass catamaran~ glazed in fairy sparkles. Watching the shimmering sea swallow flaming rays of the sinking sunset, I slowly dive deep into the lungs of lyrical lagoon to surf along saffron waves, against twinkling tides, while the seraphic soul of an emerald oyster crest unravels a sparkling carnival of summery parade. I am magnetically captivated, chasing a school of dancing dolphins, with every spin, they reflect hypnotic songs of the ocean~ a ballet of butterfly-rays, swirl to symphonies echoing from the marine kingdom, there sharks and turtles together croon secrets lost within the aquatic jungle of life. When the spirits that carry sunken sagas of coral reefs rise, a mystical goddess emerges beyond the wide horizon, where the moon is meant to glow and unfurl silvery chronicles of crystal clear memories. She is dressed in glistening algae, her scales mirror a musical melancholy; tales untold and unseen in the eyes of flawed creatures. Her beauty is beyond any ballads woven from salt soaked diamonds. I question her in awe; “What flows beneath violet ripples, ruffling with starry souvenirs? Do you hear midnight serenades of coastal birds, when neon gems light up the sea of fire?” In silence, she whispered into the drifting wind, “I am the sovereign of seafarers and day dreamers, I guide the lost to a sanctuary of serenity” Her words kept circling in ringing refrain, and I let my thoughts float, in the watery credence of her cryptic tunes, as she vanished into nothingness, leaving a fragrant tint across the celestial canvas of the sky. Now the mermaid moon draws a halo in fluorescent colors of her rainbow tail fin, splattering a trail of letters, moving in zig zag across the azure, knitted in lucky charms~ while initials of this tale ignites the universe like waterfall chandeliers.

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Date: 4/24/2024 11:48:00 AM
Dear Ink, delightful poetess, your creative magic is on full display with this amazing piece. Your poetic pen spills a dazzling array of unique imageries that lift the imagination and spirit to new heights of wonder. Your enchanting artistry shines! Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/10/2024 4:05:00 PM
Dear Inky, I’m back here again in awe of this magnificent piece of writing. Many congratulations on a very worthy, very high placement in the contest! Even the title is enchanting! As you can see by my previous comments I both equally loved and admired this as many did. Your creative imagination is absolutely astonishing! Thank you for being here … for being you! Hugs and blessings xx
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Date: 2/10/2024 8:10:00 AM
So beautiful. WOW. Just WOW. Congratulations and God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 2/10/2024 12:54:00 AM
You think and write outside the box! Delighted your poem earns a trophy win
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Date: 1/31/2024 1:04:00 PM
Gorgeous imaginings! "Goddess in glistening algae" her scales a mirror" of music- sea life is very musical. What an enjoyable read!
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:41:00 PM
Hello Ink empress, I love this poem. You really used your imagination well. My fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/26/2024 10:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative "Imagination" write. Your pen was working overtime. Looks like we both did this one. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Date: 1/26/2024 10:28:00 AM
Dear Ink, your poem is the exploration of the fantastical and dreamlike world of the ocean, as seen through the eyes of your imagination. Your word choice in the poem is rich and evocative, painting vivid images of the ocean and its inhabitants. Your use of literary devices such as simile ("glazed in fairy sparkles"), personification ("the soul of an emerald oyster crest unravels"), and metaphor ("a sanctuary of serenity") create a sense of wonder and enchantment. BOL with the contest
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Date: 1/26/2024 5:51:00 AM
--When the spirits that carry the sunken sagas of the coral reefs rise, a mystical goddess emerges beyond the wide horizon, where the moon is meant to glow and unfurl silvery chronicles of crystal clear memories---splendidly afloat on the wings of imagination, my friend. Your poem shines throughout in ornate vocabulary, as always.
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Date: 1/26/2024 5:20:00 AM
A delightful and creative poem. We fly into poetic clouds amid beautiful imagery and metaphors. You always astound me.
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Date: 1/26/2024 4:20:00 AM
Wow.... I got lost in the pelagic depths of the ocean... ! For the time being I forget that I am in this mundane world with its stark realities! Plunging down and down into the deep depths of the ocean, I see schools of dolphins gamboling, sharks and turtles crooning and intricately designed coral reefs emerging. Thank you dear Empress for escorting me into this aquatic jungle. Your meeting with the Goddess is the best part of this journey into the oceanic depths. Dear Empress, your poetic heart is exploding with imagination. Fantasy and imagination together spin and dance. Wonderful!
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Date: 1/26/2024 3:53:00 AM
knitted in lucky charms Magically delicious!
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Date: 1/25/2024 10:31:00 PM
Dear sweet Inky, what pure highly imaginative delight this is to read from your deep, creative poetic heart. So much to be enthralled with here as you took us on a magical journey at sea. The imagery is absolutely captivating,’ flying glass canoe’ ‘ emerald oyster crest’ ‘ the aquatic jungle of life’ ‘ mystical goddess’ ‘mermaid moon’ and on goes the beauty and wonder. The line, ‘ salt soaked diamonds’ really grabbed me!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 1/25/2024 10:40:00 PM
Loved this gorgeous, vibrant fantasy that took the reader by the hand and heart away from everyday life for a while. Thank you dear one for the magical adventure from your artistic pen that flowed with immense flowing rainbows. I’m a ‘rhymer’ as you know but I hope to be brave enough one day to attempt a free verse and you will be and are one of my biggest inspirations. I would love your guidance dear Inky if you have the time when my quill desires to do so. It would be a honour. Keep inspiring sweet one as you float through the drifting winds of harmonious words that create symphonies. Hugs and smiles xx :):)
Date: 1/25/2024 9:28:00 PM
Dancing dolphins . Wow . Remember the time you went snorkeling with dolphins .
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/25/2024 9:29:00 PM
Yes i was thinking of that when i wrote this haha thank you dahlin
Date: 1/25/2024 6:23:00 PM
flying glass canoe~ sea of fire? mermaid moon , does the beauty ever stop, I think not, Inky your the Empress of Fantasy, and Imagination, and I love this so :)
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/25/2024 9:30:00 PM
Awwn haha my first time trying this, i wanted to write “ flying catamaran” but wasnt sure if readers would all know what im talking about. Thank you so much sweet rose
Date: 1/25/2024 2:35:00 PM
Creative work as usual. Mermaids in the sky and halos for tailfins. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/25/2024 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much dear sara
Date: 1/25/2024 1:11:00 PM
Pure fantasy imagination, ink. Stellar poem and a sure winner!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/25/2024 9:31:00 PM
Awn thank you that means alot really. I wasnt sure but i like trying. I hope its good enough
Date: 1/25/2024 11:50:00 AM
- Here there was a lot of beauty to see ... the wonderful function of imagination ... a great way to show off your creativity ... everything is possible in the realm of imagination :) - Excellent poem, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 1/25/2024 11:43:00 AM
Watching the shimmering sea swallow flaming rays of the sinking sunset, mmmmmm that imagery!! every spin, they reflect hypnotic songs of the ocean~.. swirl to symphonies echoing from the marine kingdom.. phenomenal!! spirits that carry the sunken sagas of the coral reefs rise,.. mmm um absolute enchanted papi!! thoughts float, in the watery credence of her cryptic tunes,.. mmmm the alliteration.. ooo that ending!! ignites the universe like waterfall chandeliers. Gorgeous farytale papi !!
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Date: 1/25/2024 11:29:00 AM
I knew you had an amazing imagination and you have shown it here through poem that is not your usual style.. Its so rich in vivid imagery that it appeals to the senses. It creates a surreal atmosphere where the reader can visualize the scenes described. From the "flying glass canoe" to the "shimmering sea swallow flaming rays," each line paints a picture of magic and wonder... Its a mesmerizing exploration of the mystical and the sublime.
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Silent One
Date: 1/25/2024 11:31:00 AM
Through its enchanting imagery and evocative language, it invites readers to embark on a journey of imagination and introspection, where the boundaries between reality and fantasy blur, and the wonders of the natural world are revealed in all their splendour All the best in the contest.
Date: 1/25/2024 11:13:00 AM
Ahhh..this dreamy brilliance takes me other realms, I felt like I was floating as I read your divine, mesmeric words, my beautiful soul sis! You truly make any topic and emotion your own! The way you weave your art, always makes me wonder how your brain works! Haha! I’m always so blown away by the imagery you possess and the way you bring all to life through your powerfully delicate and ethereal words (though I shouldn’t be surprised!) as always I wish I could quote each line and verse..
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/25/2024 11:56:00 AM
Hahaha awwn you are truly the best: neon bikinis would have been so cute hahaha imagine. Thank you for understanding my jokes lolol
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 1/25/2024 11:51:00 AM
Ahhhhhahahahaha! You always have me busting out laughing so unexpectedly and expectedly! You have an art for that too! Making me laugh whether I want to or not! lol! Gosh now that image can’t be unseen in my head! Lol! I almost wish you did write about dolphins in bikinis! Hahahah! Ahhh..swimming with dolphins! Such beautiful creatures! Awww! I always appreciate you and forever supporting you, my beautiful soul sis!! And why is my comment here twice?
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 1/25/2024 11:46:00 AM
But I can’t even think which stands out to me most because it wouldn’t do it justice! Your piece as a whole is truly magnificent! You are truly a weaver of art, cascading into the hearts and souls of all who read and feel your poetry!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/25/2024 11:19:00 AM
Haha i was going a bit crazy with imagination, i actually have been swimming with dolphins so thought of that and almost got dolphins to wear bikinis lol haha. I appreciate u my beautiful soul sis always
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 1/25/2024 11:15:00 AM
But I can’t even think which stands out to me most because it wouldn’t do it justice! Your piece as a whole is truly magnificent! You are truly a weaver of art, cascading into the hearts and souls of all who read and feel your poetry!
Date: 1/25/2024 11:11:00 AM
Ink Empress, your poem created an excellent seascape adventure for me! I soared on glass, danced with dolphins, met mysteries in algae gowns. Your words, luminescent pearls, unveiled an ocean's soul, sung in starlight. Outstanding! - Blessings, Daniel
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