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Water Hibernation

Placid and frigid Clad shrouded stones of splendor In a winter bath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/7/2010 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Laura, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann (Please call me I lost your number)
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Date: 3/4/2010 1:53:00 PM
Great job in the contest and congratulations, Laura!
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Date: 3/4/2010 10:06:00 AM
A nice honor mentioned Laura. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:52:00 PM
So very nice Haiku! Laura! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/3/2010 7:56:00 PM
Placid and frigid - I like the two words put together in the beginning of your Haiku. Cool. :) Thanks for your comment too. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:31:00 PM
love the way this Haiku rolls off the tongue, Laura. congrats on your placement in this contest!
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:38:00 PM
Laura, Wow, I would have graded your outstanding haiku at the top, especially with your last line. Congratulations in being in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:36:00 AM
Laura, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:27:00 AM
Great winter Haiku. I can feel the shivers. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:02:00 AM
Really pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congrats Laura on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a beautiful Haiku for a lovely poetess.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Laura. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:48:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:55:00 AM
Not sure I want that bath--especially if it was in North Dakota right now. Nice use of alliteration in the second line. If this is a contest entry, best wishes with it. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:32:00 AM
This one is good! Is it for Raul's contest? Some people, like you, can come up with some beautiful words to describe beautiful images. Nice! Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann (soup mail)
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:50:00 AM
I wish you the best in Raul's contest Laura. Have a wonderful day my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 7:25:00 PM
Laura, I hope you place high with this little beauty!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:55:00 PM
Oh I love that last line especially!! Nicely done, Laura!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/24/2010 4:26:00 PM
Luv this one Laura.. if your entry for the new contest.. good luck... a great descriptive Haiku ..vivid and visual.. I posted a blog on poetry today if u care to comment.. thankxxx...luv..Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:57:00 PM
Quite a vivid image, Laura. I like the idea of the stones "sleeping in winter's bath." Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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