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Water Bug Love

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Melancholy water bug softly eating. Linda rolling, endless, leaping. Gentle passion lazily beating. Salty apparition, silent, peeping. Huge white horses gently blow, Looming, ghostly white horses. In summer breakers they surf and flow, Beautiful, mostly complex courses. Softly looming lazy Lin Lifts her smooth, clog-clad fin. Melancholy cricket clicks and hisses, Waking, Tom, who hastily kisses. Pungent passion water spout, Crashing sexy lovers seeping. Two little whatchamacallits twist and shout, To summer Linda, swimming, reaping. Skinny Linda gently ebbing. Foamy spray sifts through her webbing. Warm Tom lovingly stirring, laughing. Fleet water beings jumping and splashing. Eerie floating cytoplasmic forms In pools of soupy water streams. In pungent living sunspot storms He cooks water bug love in the beams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/27/2016 3:06:00 AM
Congrats Tom, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 7/27/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Teddy! :-)
Date: 7/24/2016 8:02:00 PM
I like a creative piece and this is excellent. Congrats on your win.
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Tom Arnone
Date: 7/24/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thanks, Richard.
Date: 7/24/2016 5:59:00 PM
Interesting, had my attention. Royal
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Tom Arnone
Date: 7/24/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, R. N.
Date: 4/23/2016 7:52:00 PM
bizarre! but makes for an interesting read. I saw you tell PD that it was your favorite. I think I actually liked the previous one better! but this is a fun poem. it's serendipity that the name in the poem is Linda. That is Pd's name!
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:56:00 PM
Tom, amazing write... Love LINDA
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Tom Arnone
Date: 4/21/2016 3:30:00 PM
This is one of my favs. Thanks for the compliment, P. D. :-)

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