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Watching Blackbirds

Watching Blackbirds Again, I find myself watching the blackbirds They come as a cloud that sits upon the ground Each respecting his wingman’s space As they pass overhead, they sound like a sudden spring shower That comes, then goes, finding a place in the field They move like water running across the way Pulled by gravity to a lower venue As they glean the area of worms, bugs and seeds The rear faction takes to the air Gliding to the lead for better feeding This becomes a ritual that is repeated several times Until the plate is empty, or the craw is filled They rise in waves that join to make a twisted rope Smoke from a generous campfire Rolling, Roiling, tumbling and loping They politely pass, waving goodbye With each movement of their wings And softly I can hear them sing

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Date: 10/15/2023 1:41:00 AM
this is so lovely. And watching any kind of bird can be enjoyable to do.
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Ray Dillard
Date: 10/15/2023 6:38:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the read. It’s good to see you’re still writing as well.

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