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Warmth of Rainy Day

Rain pour down so little. Watching the fireplace burning logs. I sip a cup of coffee in my hand. Thinking the last day I saw your eyes. Mesmerizing by moment that soon will pass. I picked the picture you left in my pad. 'twas only yesterday we're so in love. Now left the memories inside my heart. Dancing alone with your shadow, I know you're here yet so far. Embracing you tight in my arms. I opened my eyes and sees the light. The rain stop falling that night. The flame of love warmth me high.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/15/2017 6:05:00 AM

...poignant and lovely aiyah :-) ...words of love etched on one's heart forever. many blessings to you :-) lynn ps. hope your corner of the world is happy and peaceful :-)

Ryan Webster Casquejo

Date: 11/17/2015 12:24:00 AM

love can last forever. I like the feeling of your poem.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2014 12:10:00 AM

Hello, my dear friend Aiyah! Remembering you today. I'm so sorry if I just dropped by now. Just got a short break lately and due today; however, I'm more rested now. So, I'm having quite time at soup. How are you my very dear friend? hope you're doin well. It's been a long time. Hope to hear from you soon. I like your poem so much. It's a very sweet heartfelt write. Thanks a lot! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2014 10:31:00 PM

so romantic. I really like this one from you. Where have you been? And where is a new poem? Let's see one soon!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2014 3:55:00 PM

- Nice to see you dear friend Aiyah :) - I wish you a happy weekend !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2014 3:37:00 PM

So romantic and sad.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2014 3:39:00 PM

Rain cannot put out the flame of love which burns passionately inside of you! Very enjoyable read, Aiyah. /x/ paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2014 3:59:00 PM

my, you romance the night with rain's ambrosial trance, ria... very well done!... huggs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/16/2014 3:26:00 PM

Ahhh you should call it Shadow Dancing!! very cool verse. write, write, write Light & Love

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/15/2014 9:45:00 PM

Beautiful! Loved this one Aiyah !!

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/15/2014 9:14:00 PM

aww hugs. Enjoyed your poem my friend )

Honestly J.T.

Date: 9/15/2014 2:44:00 PM

I like your heartfelt lines -JT

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2014 2:17:00 PM

beautiful moving write Aiyah with wonderful imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2014 12:02:00 PM

- Love's power is so much greater than ourselves - When we look through the glasses of love ...... will copper be to gold - Enjoy reading your moving poem - always nice to see you my friend AiyaH !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)