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Warmth In Winter

Snow is falling down The lakes and ponds, now just ice Some fire burning, warm

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Date: 10/18/2023 4:45:00 AM
Love the images from your word choices.
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/18/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thanks :-)
Date: 10/18/2023 4:09:00 AM
This is such a lovely winter poem, the sense of warmth especially from the ambience of apricity given by soft sun rays.. Ah, that's a very beautiful feeling.. And the bonfire as well! A beautiful haiku, enjoyed reading this!
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/18/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thank you :-)

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